Question

书面表达(本题有1题，共15分)
以“How I have changed!”为题，请写一篇文章介绍你这几年来的变化，包括学习英语的方法，外型，性格，喜好，害怕的东西，生活方式这几个方面的变化。文章开头已给出。可能用到的单词.(by doing ,used to, shy,  long hair,  hate, rules, be afraid of, _changed_  ……)
How I have changed！
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Answer 1

One possible version:
How I've changed Time past quickly.I've changed a lot with the time going. When I was young,I only know the most interesting thing in the world is playing.I played games with my friends day and night.I wasted a lot of great time. But when I was a little older,I not only know playing.I realize learning is as important as playing,even much more important.I spent my whole day to study,study and study.but at that time,I do not know what "stress" means. Then,two years later,I understood.I was going to graduate from primary school and,I need to pass a special test for the entrance of junior high school.I have no time to play.I have no time to have fun with my good friends. After I had passed the examination,I felt more nervous than any time I was.Everybody was smart and I didn't have the great position.But I don't know what “give up" is.I spent more time on the subject I was not good at.So I won the first position later. That's How I've changed.My life bocomes harder and harder,but I am not scared.I try my best to let my life become more interesting.

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，介绍自己过去到现在的生活的变化。本题给出的材料较为简略，需要自己发挥的地方较多。动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。注意时态与时间状语的搭配问题，然后组织成文。注意叙述的条理性，适当使用连接词。
【两点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和从句，在叙述中使用连接词，使叙述逻辑更为合理，层次更加分明，为文章增色不少.如: …… as important as playing和玩一样重要，try my best to尽力做某事，等,学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.