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Dear Sigmund Friend,
My name is Simon. I¡¯m a Grade 9 student in Sunshine Middle School. __________                 __
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What should I do? Can you help me? I¡¯m looking forward to hearing from you!
Best wishes!
Simon.                                              

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Dear Sigmund Friend,
My name is Simon. I¡¯m a Grade 9 student in Sunshine Middle School. I was born on September 10th, 1998. My favourite sport is football and I¡¯m a member of the school football team. I like red best because red is the colour of heat and represents power and strong feelings. Wearing red can make it easier for me to take action.
I¡¯m hard-working and modest. I worry too much at times. I always pay attention to details. I¡¯m confident and I¡¯m never afraid of making a speech to a large group of people.
Now I have too much homework every day. I often stay up late to complete the exercises. I don¡¯t get enough sleep and I feel tired in class, My parents don¡¯t allow me to stay out late to play football. They care only about marks after exams. They don¡¯t see my progress, but I have tried my best to do it well.
Can you please offer me some valuable suggestions?
What should I do? Can you help me? I¡¯m looking forward to hearing from you!
Best wishes!
Simon.      

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