Question

请以"My last holiday"为题，写一篇短文。内容包括：
1. Where did you go?
2. When did you go?
3. How did you get there?
4. How long did you spend there?
5. What did you do or see?
6. What was it like?
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Answer 1

On my last holiday went to Hawaii.My classmates LiZhi wei,QinChangping and I.First day,went to the beach took a bus.The QinChangping pulled out to a stong American and he won.The LZhiwei played  volleyball with two beautiful American girl but he lost.I swam with six sporsmans.My sawm was the best.
Next day.We saw a film in a big cinema.We had lunch in a big hotel and ate lots of shashliks.There shashilks were very nice.Afternoon ,we went to graeyard of  ZhangXue liang ,and took lots of photos.
Third day.We stayed 5 hours in the beach.We played bolleyball with seven beautiful American girls.there  were only us there boys ,so we won to the girls.Afternoon ,we bought many books of ZhangXueliang in there.The books were very nice.I am  going to send  my friends.
Next we took a plane to Beijing .I love Hawaii.

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍自己的最后一个假期。本题所给材料比较简单，动词前先要阅读所给六个问题,对涉及问题都要有所回应。在写作时要注意时态，人称和固定词组的搭配，要注意语言的规范性,注意应用所给单词，短语。结合材料可知本文主要是一般过去时态，第一人称，注意主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，序数词，做到上下文联系紧密，、条理清楚，符合逻辑关系。
点评：做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。