Question

书面表达（共10分）
为了使同学们之间相处得更加融洽，并且能够更好地适应社会，你校学生会正在举办以“how to behave well”为主题的英语征文比赛，请你写一篇英语短文谈谈你的看法。
要点：1.守时、有礼貌、诚实、公正；
2.友好待人，乐于助人；
3. ……
要求：1.用上所给要点，并适当补充。
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地址等相关信息。
3. 80个单词左右。
 
 
 
 
 

Answer 1

One possible version：
What should we teenagers do to get on well with everything and everyone else? Here is what we should do and shouldn’t be allowed to do.
As a good student, we must be on time and honest. And we should be polite and fair to everyone. Also, we should be kind and friendly to others. We should be ready to help people in trouble. Then we can get the same help from others. Besides these, we should obey traffic rules to keep safe. But we shouldn’t make noise in public. We shouldn’t drop litter everywhere, either.
It is not easy to behave well in daily life. However, everything will be OK if we try our best.

试题分析：本篇书面表达应根据提纲内容谈谈表现得更好。在写作时，应该注意文章结构与文章层次。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，准确运用时态。文章衔接连贯，运用了as a good student, and, also, then, besides,but等连词进行衔接。同时，本文中运用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:on time, be fair to , in public, drop litter everywhere等。文章结构清楚，第一段引出话题，第二段详细表达观点，第三段总结。