题目内容
书面表达
中考体育测试刚刚结束,你考的怎样?
写一篇100词左右的日记,记述你参加体育测试的经历与感受。
要求:1.内容充实,语言准确,流畅。
2.文章中不得涉及真实姓名及学校名称。
以下词汇也许对你的写作有帮助:
May 29, 2009 Friday Fine
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解析:
Today I finished my PE test.As a boy I had two parts.One is the long jump, and the other is the 1000m race.I did better in the 1000m race.It took me 5 minutes and 20 seconds.But I didn’t do well in the long jump.I only jumped 4.5 meters.I love sports.I often play football and basketball in my out-of-class activities.So I think I am pretty fit.This time the PE test is part of the Senior High School entrance test.Most of us are serious about it.
根据内容要点、语言表达和卷面书写情况分档次评分:
1、优秀12-15分。内容要点齐全,语言准确,行文连贯,表达清楚。句式富于变化,词句优美。卷面整洁,字迹清楚、规范。
2、较好8-11分。内容要点基本齐全,语言基本准确,行文基本连贯,表达基本清楚。词汇、语法错误不多。卷面较整洁,字迹清楚。
3、一般4-7分。写出部分要点,语言表达错误较多,但尚能达意。卷面较潦草凌乱,字迹欠规范。
4、较差0-3分。内容要点严重不足,语言表达错误很多,语句支离破碎,很难看出要求表达的意思。卷面脏乱,字迹难以辨认