Question

请你以“My spare time “ 为题，描述自己的课余生活。要求60-----80个单词。
提示词；be interested in ; be good at , be busy with ,weekends ,enjoy ,like, spend  --in

Answer 1

I’m interested in playing computer games .I’m good at swimming and playing basketball , but I have no time .From Monday to Friday ,I am busy with my study and do much homework both in the daytime and in the evening .So I have my spare time only on weekends . In the afternoon, I usually spend most of time in playing with my friends . Sometimes I help my parents with housework. In the evening, I often go to moves, My favourite moves are Superman and Spiderman, I want to be a hero to help people in the future .

试题分析：本文的题目是my spare time，介绍自己的课余生活，也就是介绍学习之外从事的活动，范围比较广泛。书写时，注意根据时间来安排课余活动，不要用排比性的句型泛泛谈论，要切中主题。书写时，要注意人称应该用第一人称，而时态应该用一般现在时。还应该注意连词的应用等。
【亮点说明】本书面表达书写能按照时间的顺序来安排，使得整篇文章比较有条理，思路也很清晰。文中能正确运用所给的提示词，并且，书写时注意了，句子之间的衔接，运用了一些必要的连词如but、so等。一些句型运用的也很到位，如 My favourite moves are Superman and Spiderman, I want to be a hero to help people in the future 等这些都为文章添色不少。