Question

伴着北京奥运会倒计时的钟声，我们连云港创建文明城市的步伐也越迈越快，市民的素质日趋提高，
但在公共场所仍有一些不文明的行为，请根据下列几幅漫画，用英语为某英文报纸写一篇短文，弘扬文明行为，指出陋习，并就创建文明港城提出自己的建议。

注意：1．短文应包含所有漫画的内容；
2．提出自己的建议，至少2条；
3．字数100左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
4．参考词汇：文明的一civilized 吐痰一spit
Building a Civilized City With the Beijing Olympic Games coming near,  people in Lianyungang are trying hard to build the city into a civilized one._________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

Building a civilized city With the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games coming near,  people in Lianyungang are trying hard to build the city into a civi­lized one. Most people do well,  they are always ready to help others,  some help the blind/the old to cross the road,  some pick up the rubbish on the way. But there are still some people,  they are not so polite,  some draw pictures or write mean­ingless words on the wall,  some spit everywhere,  some don’t wait in line,  these are all bad manners and shouldn’t be done. I think people should have some good habits,  such as waiting in line,  speaking in a low voice in public places,  and helping the weak. If everyone tries to do good and be polite,  we are sure to turn our city into a civilized one.

试题分析：这是一篇漫画类作文，首先要看懂漫画内容，所以要用第三人称来写，且需要用一般现在时。需要注意：1．短文应包含所有漫画的内容；2．提出自己的建议，至少2条；3．字数100左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
点评：本文属于漫画类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。