Question

假如你是赵洋，你想要假如江苏观鸟协会。请根据申请表内容完成80词左右的申请信.

Name	Zhao Yang	Date of birth	2000年10月20日
Telephone number	0518--87260039	Email	8243657@qq.com
School	Sunshine Middle school	Grade	8
Favourite subjects	生物、英语	Interests and hobbies	收集各种动物图片、听音乐
Activities to protect wildlife		去年春天和朋友一起去扎龙自然保护区参加了保护鸟类的活动。
reasons	喜爱大自然，对植物动物感兴趣， 想要更多的了解鸟，人们砍伐树，鸟越来越少，想做些事情来保护鸟
Free time	每周六下午2点到5点

注意：书写工整, 段落分明。
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join the Birdwatching Society.
                                                                                
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
Yours sincerely,
Zhao Yang

Answer 1

Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join the Birdwatching Society.
My name is Zhao Yang. I was born on 20th October, 2000. I’m in Grade 8 at Sunshine Middle school. My favourite subjects are biology and English. My interests and hobbies are collecting the pictures of all kinds of animals and listening to music. I love nature and I’m very interested in animals and plants. I also want to know more about birds. Because I learned that the number of birds is becoming smaller and smaller, so I want to do some things to protect them. Last Spring my classmates and I went to Zhalong reserve to take part in the activity of protecting animals.. And I’m free between two and five O’clock every Saturday afternoon.
I will be very happy if I can become a member of your club. You can call me on 0518--87260039 or e-mail me at 8243657@qq.com.
Yours sincerely,
Zhao Yang

试题分析：这是一篇应用文写作，写一封应聘信。由于给出的材料比较全面，我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。结合材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，第一人称，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
【亮点说明】这篇短文语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，准确地阐明了自己基本爱好和特长，并包含了文中所要求的全部信息，符合应聘信的格式和要求。其中使用了一些固定句式和短语，包含复合形容词的准确使用为文章增色不少.如the number of birds， I’m very interested in animals and plants，I will be very happy if I can become a member of your club.学习中再注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。