Question

海口是一个美丽的城市，近几年来海口发生了巨大的变化。请你根据以下表格所提供的信息，写一篇70词左右的小短文，谈谈海口几十年前的状况和现在所发生的变化。
要求：1、涵盖所有提示，可适当发挥；2、不少于70词（不包括已给出的短文开头）；
3、语句通顺，语法正确。

海 口	过 去	现 在
人口	25万	150万
道路	窄	宽
居住环境	小、暗	高、亮，舒服
教育	很少人有机会享受优质教育	学生可以在现代化、舒适的教室学习
生活状况	艰难	越来越好

 
Haikou has developed rapidly these years.                                       

Answer 1

Haikou has developed rapidly these years. But In the 1960s, there were only 25,000 people in the city. The roads were narrow. And many people were crowded in a small and dark house. Few children had the chance to receive a good education. Life was very hard at that time.
But now Haikou has changed a lot. The population in Haikou is 1,500,000 now. The roads are wide and people can live in tall and bright buildings. And students can study in modern and comfortable classrooms. Life is better and better in Haikou now.

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，要求写一篇介绍一个城市的巨大变化。本题给出的材料较为详细，动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称问题较为复杂，时态涉及过去现在及将来的变化，注意时态与时间状语的搭配。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
点评：做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。