Question

关于减压提建议

Answer 1

Now many students are under too much pressure. They always feel too tired to listen to teachers carefully in class.
It’s important for students to relax. Here are some different ways to relax themselves. For example, they can try to have enough sleep, or they can listen to their favorite music after class. They can also read some books or do some sports. For me, I often hang out with my friends after school.
While you are studying, don’t forget to relax yourself. In this way, you will be healthy and study better.

试题分析：这是一篇话题作文。要求根据许多学生因为压力过大，谈谈减压的几点建议。
【亮点说明】这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。