Question

Write at least 60 words about the topic “My opinion on copying others? homework”(以“我对抄袭他们人作业的看法”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 注意：
1.短文必须包含下列三大点；
2. 第一至第三要点必须包含1--2个列表中所给词语，但第三点要适当发挥；
3.短文标题与开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

1)The main reason (主要原因)	a large amount of homework, difficult to work out, lazy
2) The harms         (危害)	a bad habit, be against the rules of the school
3)Your views       (你的看法)	be honest, work hard

（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）

Answer 1

My opinion on copying others’ homework
It is known to us all that some students copy others’ homework. There are several reasons for this phenomenon. The main reason is that a large amount of homework which is difficult to work out needs to be done every day. Although copying others’ homework seems to do us a favor when we have to stay up late to finish the endless exercises, in fact, it really does harm to us students in terms of getting into a bad habit of being lazy to think over difficult questions. As far as I am concerned, as a student, we should not only be honest but work hard to finish all the homework on our own as well. As a saying goes ”practice makes perfect”. If we keep practicing and reviewing our lessons through doing homework, we can do a good job in our exams.

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文，文章的题目已经给出，而且列出了三条细节。写作文时要仔细审题，每一条都要写到。要注意前后句的连接，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】文章主要写我对抄袭作业的看法，要点全部都写出，并且增加了一些内容使文章更通顺，更符合要求。文中使用很多短语，让文章更加出彩，如It is known to us all that，a large amount of.，stay up late , As far as I am concerned，As a saying goes ”practice makes perfect”等。在平时的学习中，要注意点滴积累，这样在写作文时才能灵活运用。