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第五部分：书面表达。（15分）请将文章用0.5毫米黑色签字 笔写在答题卡相应的位置上。
俗话说：“国有国法，家有家规。”为了使子女身心健康、顺利成长，使家庭成员之间的关系更融洽、更和谐，每个家庭都会有这样或那样的家庭规矩。比如：必须按时回家，不准打电子游戏等。请你结合家庭的实际情况，根据下面的提示和要求，以My Family Rules为题，写一篇作文。
提示：家里有哪些规矩；对家规的感受；对父母的建议。
要求：必须包括提示内容，可以适当发挥；80个词左右；文中不得出现真实的地名和人名。
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Answer 1

There are many rules in my family. And most of them are about me. For example, on weekdays I have to get up early in the morning; I can't watch TV or go out on school nights; I have to go home quickly after school；I can’t play computer games, and so on.
There are too many! I feel my parents are too strict with me. And sometimes it's unfair. Why are there so many rules for me but so few for my parents?
So, my dear parents, please understand me! I know both of you want me to study hard, but I'm only a child. I need more happy time to grow up healthily although I'll work hard, too. Would you please give me more time to do the things that I like to do?

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。写作前一定要看清题目，根据要求作文一定要包含提示内容，所以在写作时可以按照提示组织文章内容。文章可用第一人称和一般现在时来描写。注意主谓一致和表达的准确性。可适当使用连词使文章逻辑跟紧密。
【亮点说明】
这篇作文紧扣要求，要点周全，内容充实。文中使用了很多很有用的表达方式和句型，例如：for example例如；have to 不得不；grow up 成长；and so on 等等；Why are there so many rules for me but so few for my parents?为什么对我有那么多的规定，而对他们则没说明规定。Many多，和few几乎没有，形成了对比。I need more happy time to grow up healthily although I'll work hard, too.尽管我也好努力学习，但我也需要多点快乐时间来健康成长。Would you please give me more time to do the things that I like to do?你们能多给我点时间让我做自己喜欢的事情吗？that后面引导定语从句修饰things。