Question

我校开展“读好书，促成长”的活动，读书恰好是你最喜欢的课外活动，请你根据这次活动的主题，参考表格中所给的的信息并适当发挥，写一篇倡议书，向全校同学发出倡议。

意义	获取信息，增长见识，使人快乐，有助于成长等
现状	听音乐、看电视、上网等占去了学生大部分的课外阅读时间
倡议	多读书，读好书

要求：1．词数：80词左右。
2．倡议书必须包含所有要点，行文连贯，表达清楚，书写规范
3．开头结尾已写好，不计入总词数。
My dear friends,
Reading is very important in our life.________________________________________
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___________________Let’s start reading now!

Answer 1

My dear friends,
Reading is very important in our life. We can get knowledge by reading a lot of good books. It can not only open up our eyes but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study can be improved if we read more important books. Reading also helps us grow up better.
However, many activities take up much of our reading time , such as listening to music, watching TV and going online. What a pity! So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books and read good books. It will be very helpful for us !
Let's start reading now!

试题分析：本文属于给出一个主题，对这个主题的相关内容进行论述。首先论述读书对我们的好处，可从获取知识，使人明智，有助于成功等多个方面进行阐述；其次对于现在的学生如何花费时间来论述，说明现状；最后陈述观点，发出倡议。按照提纲中的三部分内容进行写作，这样做到不遗漏要点同时也表达充分得体。
【亮点说明】在对于诸如此类文章的写作，学生在平时的练习、学习生活中要善于积累常用的表达多个好处的句型。如be good for, benefit, useful等单词短语。英语的写作过程中切忌使用重复的表达，对于不会表达的意思要学会替换，同时注意用平时在课本中或是阅读中积累的单词句型来自如的表达自己的意思，这样文章才能写出新意，写出文采，本文就较好地注意到了这几点，论述的有理有据，头头是道，而且关联词的恰当使用也很突出，如not only…but also，还有比较级的准确使用都很到位。