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以Great changes in my Hometown 为题,按下列提示要求写一篇80词左右短文,介绍自己家乡的变化。
注意:1文中不得出现具体地名,开头已给出,不几入总数。
2 词汇:traffic 交通; convenient 方便的;pollution 污染; rubbish 垃圾;
The changes in My hometown
In the past ,my hometown was very small.
以Great changes in my Hometown 为题,按下列提示要求写一篇80词左右短文,介绍自己家乡的变化。
过去 | 生活贫困,房屋破旧阴暗;污染严重,垃圾遍地。道路窄 游客很少。 |
现在 | 住房宽敞,明亮;现代学校,许多人有小车,孩子可接受教育,空气更新鲜;交通方便:游客每年有几万。我的感受是希望记住过去,展望未来是很重要的。 |
2 词汇:traffic 交通; convenient 方便的;pollution 污染; rubbish 垃圾;
The changes in My hometown
In the past ,my hometown was very small.
The Changes in My Hometown
In the past ,my hometown was very small, people lived a poor life ,The houses were old and dark .pollution was very serious ,and there was rubbish everywhere .the roads were narrow and traffic was not convenient , so few visitors came here .
Now great changes have taken place in my hometown .people are living in many tall buildings ,.what’s more, There are many modern schools and children can get a good education .there are trees ,flowers ,and grass everywhere ,people can see greener mountains, cleaner rivers and bluer sky ,and their houses are larger and brighter . Many people have their own cars .every year thousands of people tourists come to my hometown for a visit.
I’m sure my hometown will become better and better ,I think It is important to remember the past and dream about the future.
试题分析:本题要求写一篇关于介绍自己的家乡变化的短文。本文所给材料比较详细。写作中注意将家乡过去和现在的一些情况介绍清楚,并描述自己对将来的展望。结合材料可知本文时态人称问题比较复杂,涉及过去,现在和将来三种时态,注意时态与时间状语的搭配问题及主谓一致问题。写作中注意使用连词,序数词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。最后,注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误,写好后反复读几遍,适当修改。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少。如: take place发生;what’s more而且;thousands of成千上万的;it is……to do sth做某事很重要等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。
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