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【题目】书面表达

介绍我的家乡:

1. 我的家乡阳山镇,是一个非常安静又美丽的小镇,这儿的空气清新。

2. 在这里有许多事情可以做。可以……

3. 能住在这样一个镇上,真是幸运的。

注:1. 第二个要点要求用2-3句话发挥合理的想象。

2. 全文字数在70词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。

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【答案】

One possible version:

I live in Yangshan Town. It is a very quiet and beautiful town. The air is fresh here. There are a lot of things to do, such as walking in the park, hearing the birds sing and smelling the flowers.The Chinese restaurants are all over the place, and I can have Chinese food better. At the weekend, I often see a film in the local cinema. Sometimes I row a boat with my friends on the lake. I enjoy my life here. It is lucky to live here. Welcome to my hometown.

【解析】

试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文,介绍我的家乡阳山镇。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为单数第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:It is…,There are…,The Chinese restaurants are…,and I can have…,I often see a film…,I enjoy…等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系,注意文后邀请大家到我的家乡来玩。

写作亮点:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了我的家乡的名字,接下来介绍我的家乡的空气、我经常做的事、食物,最后表示自己喜欢生活在这里,并欢迎大家来这里玩。此处a lot of, such as, hear sb do sth, all over, at the weekend, see a film, row a boat, be lucky to do sth, welcome to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

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