题目内容
【题目】书面表达:
请根据以下提示,用英语写一篇70词左右的短文。短文要点如下:
1. 我校互助俱乐部(Helping Hands Club)的成员将于本周五下午三点在操
场见面;
2. 他们中有些人要帮助老师打扫办公室,有些要辅导同学作业;
3. 如果你的电脑或者自行车坏了,他们也能帮你修理;
4. 他们很乐意帮你解决你身边的各种问题,如果你需要帮助,他们正在等着你。
5. 希望------(此处自由发挥一句,表达自己的愿望或想法)
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【答案】
The members of our school’s Helping Hands Club will meet in the playground at 3 P.m. this Friday . Some of them will help the teachers clean their offices. Some will help the classmates with their homework. If your computers or bicycles are broken, they can also help you fix them. They are ready to help you with all kinds of problems around you. They are waiting for you if you need help. (We hope more students will join the club.)
【解析】
试题分析:本文属于提纲类短文,仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译,而是要添加些内容,使文章看起来更充实,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括。根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;语言表达要符合英语习惯。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。
写作亮点:这是一篇比较优秀的作文,本文很好地完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点;应用了我们熟悉的句型和短语Some will help the classmates with their homework.等,语言表达要符合英语习惯,准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯。