Question

Jim 在英语考试中表现不好，很糟糕，又感到孤独，请写一封信对他进行开导。内容包括：
①对自己有信心；②别沉默，多与人交流；③更加努力学习；④参加各种活动；⑤笑对生活等
 Dear Jim ,                                                    
      I’m sorry to hear that                                  
                                                               
                                                               
                                                               
                                                               
Yours,
Kangkang

Answer 1

Dear Jim,
I am sorry to hear that you didn’t do well in the last exam and you feel bad now. What I want to say to you now is that this is nothing. You should be confident of yourself. Don’t be silent and try to talk more to people,  Such as your teacher, your classmates and your parents, You many take part in all kinds of activities and it will make you feel relaxed. Besides, go on studying harder and I believe you are sure to make great progress.
Remember that life will smile to you if you smile to life.
Yours,
Kangkang

试题分析：本题要求根据中文提示写一篇短文，对在英语考试中表现不好，很糟糕，又感到孤独的Jim进行开导。在写作时一定要做到，语句通顺，合乎逻辑，不遗漏一个要点。
【亮点说明】该文多次使用复合句如What I want to say to you now is that this is nothing. I believe you are sure to make great progress. Remember that life will smile to you if you smile to life.
为文章增色不少。