Question

近两年来，一些城市的中学校园兴起了中学生出国留学热，Bill和Tom表达了各自不同的观点,你认为中学生到国外学习有利还是有弊呢?

Bill	1. foreign language environment 2. learn to live by oneself 3. widen one’s eyes
Tom	1. quite expensive in foreign countries 2. be not used to their way of living 3. can’t get on well with foreigners sometimes
Your ideas	......

注意：1.内容可包括上述要点，适当发挥。
2.写出你自己的观点至少两条。
3.词数:80个词左右。开头已给出，开头部分内容不记入总词数。
Nowadays, studying abroad is becoming more and more popular in our country. Many middle school students like to study abroad.   
   
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Answer 1

Nowadays, studying abroad is becoming more and more popular in our country. Many middle school students like to study abroad. Bill thinks it is very important for students to study in a better language environment It can help students improve their ability to live by themselves. It can also help them widen their eyes.
But Tom thinks students need lots of money because things there are quite expensive.Sometimes students may not be used to their way of living and they can’t get on well with foreiners.
In my opinion,everything has two sides.On the one hand,students can exchange cultures with foreigners.On the other hand, they may feel lonely and homesick.
In a word,everyone should walk their own way.

试题分析：这是一篇利用图表的给材料作文。要求介绍Bill和Tom对出国热的各自不同的观点,以及你的观点。主要用到一般现在时和第一第三人称。
【亮点说明】这篇短文在写作时注意避免句式重复而且使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如In my opinion，On the one hand, On the other hand,等。句式it is very important for students to study in a better language environment，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。