Question

当你伤心和遇到困难的时候，你会怎么做呢？请根据自己的经历写一篇短文。要求：语句通顺，条理清晰； 60词左右。
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Answer 1

Everyone feels sad sometimes, especially when unhappy things happen. It’s important to talk to someone else. He may give you some advice.
When you fail in your exam, you’ll feel sad and worried. But you should be more confident than before. You can go and ask your teacher for help. When you have a fight with your little brother, you should not be angry with him. You may say sorry to him at once because you are older. When you want to make friends with Li Mei but she refuses to accept you, you cannot be disappointed. You’d better be friendly and helpful. You never feel bored to stay with her so that you’ll get on well with her soon. Then she would like to be your friend. Don’t be afraid. Everyone has your trouble at your age. 

试题分析：：这是一篇话题作文，写写你伤心和遇到困难的时候，你会怎么做。本题没有给出具体材料,需要自己先确定写作内容,然后在动笔写作.选取材料时,注意选择自己熟悉的内容.在写作时要注意时态，人称和固定词组的搭配，要注意语言的规范性。结合话题可知本文主要是一般现在时态，人称可以是单数第一人称，也可以是第二人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配问题。写作中适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】在写书面表达时首先要注意的问题就是人称，不能混淆人称；其次，应注意动词的形式，根据不同的人称确定动词的形式；再次，句型应该符合英语的表达习惯；最后，用自己熟练掌握的句型造句。