Question

假如你叫李华，是初三（2）班的一名学生，你所在学校的 “爱心俱乐部 (Helping Hands Club)” 将吸收新的成员。你想加入该俱乐部，请你根据你自己的擅长，平时的爱心表现以及参加爱心俱乐部的目的写一封自荐信。收信人是高先生.(15分)
词语：name, student, Class 2, Grade 3, member, hard, be good at,
get along with, join

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Gao,
My name is Li Hua. I’m a student from Class 2, Grade 3. I’d like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club. As a student, I work hard at my lessons. I am good at English and do well in both speaking and listening. Besides, I am easy to get along with and enjoy helping others. On my way home I often help the people who are in trouble. When I see old people or children cross the street, I usually help them. If I join the club, I will do more for others. I’ll be glad if I am received. I am looking forwards to getting your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文要求按照题目要求完成这篇自荐信的写作，我们要用恰当的语言把所列举的内容准确地表达出来。写作中要包含个人的基本信息，自己的擅长，平时的爱心表现以及参加爱心俱乐部的目的等几个方面进行陈述，表达出自己想入会的愿望等。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，人称主要是第一人称，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题。写作中注意上下文的过度，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文简明、扼要地阐明了自己的基本情况，并包含了文中所要求的个人全部信息，包括爱好、特长平时的爱心表现和入会目的等都有所交代。其中使用了一些固定句式和短语，包含状语从句的准确使用可圈可点.如 am good at English and do well in both speaking and listening.，When I see old people or children cross the street，I’ll be glad if I am received.，学习中再注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。