Question

初级写作  (本题一节，计15分）你们班的交流生Mary 来自英国。本周六她要在家举办生日聚会，邀请你去参加。 请你根据邀请函和提示，适当发挥， 写一篇80词左右的信婉言拒绝她的邀请。

Birthday Party! Please come to my 13th birthday party.          Saturday, October 24th, 5:00 p.m. My house, No. 25, West Street.                                  Mary

提示： 1. 上午参加英语竞赛；2. 下午去足球俱乐部；3. 晚上去看电影。

Dear Mary, Thank you for your invitation.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 I wish you a happy birthday. Mike

Answer 1

 

Dear Mary, Thank you for your invitation. I’d really love to,but I’m afaid I couldn’t. I won’t be free that day. First,I will take part in the English contest in the morning. Then ,I will go to the Football Club  in the afternoon. Finally, I will go to the cinema with my aunt  in the evening. She just came back from New York a few days ago. And she will leave for New York the day after tomorrow. I wish you a happy birthday. Mike

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文作者主要写信拒绝邀请，主要用一般将来时。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如take part in,in the morning,in the afternoon,in the evening,go to the cinema,came back from,a few days ago,leave for ,the day after tomorrow等短语，委婉语气 I’d really love to,but I’m afaid I couldn’t.还用到first，then ，finally。文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。