Question

假如你是张胜，在暑假里和父母一起到北京，请根据下面的行程给你的笔友埃里克（Eric）写一封邮件，向他介绍你的北京之旅以及你的感受。
行程：第一天：天安门广场（Tian’anmen Square）;故宫（the Forbidden City）
第二天：颐和园（the Summer palace） 第三天：长城（the Great WALL）
要求：1。词数70词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.语句通顺，结构完整。
Dear Eric,
I went to Beijing with my parents last week and we had a good time there.
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When you are free, welcome to China and we can visit these great places together.
Yours,          
Zhang Sheng

Answer 1

We first went to the heart of China-Tian’anmen Square.It is one of the largest squares in the world. On one side of the square is the Great Hall of the People and on the other side is the Museum of Chinese History. A lot of people from all over the world come to visit the square every day.Then we went to the Forbidden City,I thought that was really beautiful The Palace Museum has 9999 palaces. It has a very long history. I bought a lot of souvenirs of the Palace Museum. What nice palaces these are!
Next day we visited the Palace Museum and felt excited. If you want to know more about the Palace Museum, you can go to Beijing and have a look.On the third day ,we visited the Great Wall. It is very long and old.. It has millions of bricks. Each brick is very big and heavy. Lots of people from different countries like climbing the Great Wall. We felt very tired when we climbed to the top of the Great Wall.but I was happybecause I know the chinese saying：One who fails to reach the Great Wall is not a hero！

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文是一篇描述假期旅游的文章，所以主要时态是过去时态。当在描写景点时，可以根据需要用一般现在时。人称主要是采用第一人称复数。在写作时注意把景点描述全，同时适当发挥补充一些相关内容，是文章饱满，丰富。注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文所给材料直接，不易发挥。但作者详细的描述了各景点的特色，可见英语基础的扎实。同时引用谚语One who fails to reach the Great Wall is not a hero！不到长城非好汉。更给文章增色不少。为了写好文章，平时就要多积累一些词汇，名言等。