题目内容
【题目】书面表达
上周日我和Sandy去野生动物园参观,了解到很多动物的生存现状,想在School newsletter上发文呼吁同学们共同保护动物。请就下面表格提示内容写一篇80词左右的短文。
内容提示:
现状 | 居无定所 | 无食可觅 |
原因 | 人类不断砍伐森林和侵占土地 | 温度降至零度以下 |
应对措施 | 不仅可以立法,还可以多建自然保护区(nature reserve) | |
建议 | 作为中学生,…… |
注意:
1. 短文须包括所有提示内容,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2. 第5个要点的内容须展开合理想象,适当发挥1-2句;
3. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Last Sunday, Sandy and I went to the Wildlife Park. _______________________________
【答案】
One possible version:
Last Sunday, Sandy and I went to the Wildlife Park.. We learnt that wildlife had nowhere to live because humans kept cutting down forests and taking lands. Also when the temperature dropped below zero, wildlife had no food to eat. As a result, we should take action to prevent natural disasters and protect wildlife. We can both make laws and build more nature reserves. As students, we should always ask our parents and relatives not to buy any fur coats. We should try to keep our world clean and peace.
(80 words)
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达是一篇提纲类话题作文。请你写一篇呼吁同学们共同保护动物的80词左右的短文。话题贴近学生生活,使学生易于发挥。作文可以分为四个方面:1.动物的生存现状;2.造成这种情况的原因;3.应对措施。4.你的建议。要做到层次分明,段落清楚。人称为第一人称,主要使用一般现在时态。注意:句子结构要准确,要点要齐全,内容要合理,篇章结构要连贯,还应满足词数要求。
写作亮点:该文内容合理,结构连贯,段落清晰,要点齐全。