题目内容

Jim 是一名中学生,现在的他与两年前有很大的不同。请根据提示完成作文,80词左右。
  Two years ago
Now
  a primary school student
a middle school student
   short,thin,quiet
tall,outgoing,a little heavy
   hardly exercise
exercise every day
  like junk food
like ,fruit and vegetables
drink milk,healthy
        lazy
more hard-working,
get better grades

One possible version:
Jim is now a middle school student, but two years ago he was a primary school student. He is quite different from what he was two years ago. He was short, thin and quiet then and he hardly did exercise, while now he is tall, outgoing and a little heavy because he does exercise every day. He likes eating healthy food now, for example , fruit and vegetables and often drinks milk instead of junk food. He’s more hard-working than lazy. So he gets better grades than before.

试题分析:本文是篇材料作文,材料非常简单,学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必须认真审题,首先要注意文章的时态, 要求写现在和过去的差别,应该分别用一般现在时和一般过去时说明现在和过去的情况。人称用第三人称Jim。注意认真阅读材料,分析英语的正确表达和句子之间的衔接。
【亮点说明】 本文做到了包含所有内容要点,语句通顺,标点符号运用正确。还运用了different from; for example;动词的-ing形式做宾语等等。并注意了句子开头的变化和的衔接如:because,and, but, so等等。
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假如你是阳光中学的一名初三学生Simon,你要写封信给青少年专家Sigmund Friend,告诉他你的烦恼,并请求帮助。请根据下列表格中所列的信息,完成一封信。
个人信息
1998年9月10日出生;校足球队成员,喜欢踢足球;最喜欢红色,因为……
性格特点
勤奋,谦虚;有时多虑;注意细节;自信(举一例)……
烦恼
作业多,经常熬夜,睡眠不足,上课疲劳;父母不许我在外面踢球到很晚;他们只关心考试分数,没注意到我的进步,我已经尽力……
愿望
希望得到有价值的建议。
要求:1. 表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯。
2. 要点必须包括表格中的所有信息,可以适当发挥。
3. 词数100左右(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Sigmund Friend,
My name is Simon. I’m a Grade 9 student in Sunshine Middle School. __________                 __
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What should I do? Can you help me? I’m looking forward to hearing from you!
Best wishes!
Simon.                                              

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