Question

【题目】写作

假设你有位朋友叫Kitty, 表格中列出了她的一些情况，请根据此写一篇英文短文。

外貌特征	圆脸，笑眯眯的眼睛看上去很聪明;
品行	1. 比班上其他任何学生都努力； 2. 富有幽默感，...;(举一例说明) 3. 对人友善，...;（举一例说明）
爱好	喜欢旅行，去年和父母一起去北京，参观了很多名胜古迹，他们在那玩的很开心
未来计划	长大后想成为..., 做些...（举一例说明）

要求：1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2.必须包含所有信息，并作适当发挥；

3.字数在100字左右；

4.不得使用真实姓名和校名等。

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Answer 1

【答案】

I have a good friend named Kitty. She has a round face. There is always a smile on her face. And her smiling eyes make her look smart.

Kitty is the most hard-working student in her class. She is very helpful and humorous. She often tells jokes to make us laugh happily. She is such a helpful friend that she is always willing to help others. For example，she is always glad to help someone with their difficulties.

She likes traveling. Last year she went to Beijing with her parents to visit many places of interest. They had a great time there.

Her dream is to be a social worker，because she wants to help more people.

【解析】

试题分析：本题是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第三人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：本范文分为四段，每一段包含着提示内容的一个要点：第一段描写朋友的外貌。其的过去分词作定语使表示简捷生动；第二段介绍好友的品行，其中用到了不定式作状语，such…that…、help sb with sth等等结构，使本文增色不少；第三段描写好友的爱好。最后一段写未来的计划。短文语句通顺，语法正确，层次清楚，条理分明。中心突出。