Question

【题目】书面表达

在你成长的历程中，有些日子会让你开心快乐，经久难忘。请以“My Pleasant Day”为题，用英语写一篇80个词左右的短文，记述你那天的活动和感受(如exciting，fun. . . )。

要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。

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Answer 1

【答案】

My Pleasant Day

I had a pleasant day last month. In the morning, I got up late and then began to do my homework. It took me about two hours to finish it. Next, I had fun playing computer games. While my mother was cooking 1unch, I cleaned the house and washed nay clothes. In the afternoon, I played tennis happily with my friends. Before I went to bed, I listened to music. It made me relaxed. What a happy day I had!

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇材料作文。以“My Pleasant Day”为题，写一篇你所经历过的，开心而难忘的一天。人称为第一人称。由于是介绍过去发生的事情，写作中要注意运用一般现在时态来描述。注意表达的条理性，用好连接词，可适当发挥使行文连贯。

写作亮点：文章简单介绍了自己所经历过的，开心而难忘的一天。时态及动词短语的把握上非常到位。结构紧凑，语言简练，层次分明。It took me about two hours to finish it. Next, I had fun playing computer games.非谓语动词的使用非常准确。感叹句的使用What a happy day I had!使自己的感受得到了升华。