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【题目】书面表达

以“My favourite director——Zhang Yimou” 为题。

提示：1.Birthday: 1951年11月14日; Birthplace: 陕西西安。1978年进入北京电影学院学习。外貌。

2. Films: 《一个都不能少》（Not One Less）(56届威尼斯电影节“最佳影片金狮奖”)是一部令他自己最满意的影片；《大红灯笼高高挂》(Raise the Red Lantern)(1991年银狮奖)；《秋菊打官司》（The Story of Qiuju）(1992年金狮奖)；参考词汇：the Golden Lion Prize for Best Movie; Venice Film Festival; Berlin International Movie Festival; satisfying film(满意的电影)；the Silver Lion Prize; the Golden Bear Prize

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【答案】My favourite director——Zhang Yimou

A Chinese film directed by Zhang Yimou who was born on November 14, 1951 in Xi’an Shanxi Province, won the Golden Lion Prize for the best movie at the 56th Venice Film Festival. Zhang said it was the most satisfying film he has ever directed.

This is the third time that Zhang has won a prize at the Venice Film Festival. His Raised the Red Lantern won the Silver Lion Prize in 1991. One year later, he won the Golden Lion Prize for the film The Story of Qiuju.

Zhang has won other prizes at international film festival. For example, he was awarded the Golden Bear Prize for his film Red Sorghum at the 38th Berlin International Movie Festival in 1988.

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