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例如:It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you.

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Luckily I was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”.I’ll arrive in Bristol at

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around 8 pm in Friday evening.

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Time is valuable but limit.There’s a famous saying, “Time is life”, this shows the importance of time.When time had gone, it will never return.It is a pity when many people make poor use of time.They spend their precious time oversleeping, drinking and hanging around. They don’t realize wasting time is equal with wasting part of their life.They always regret having made little achievement so far.However, we should form the habit of value time.Do not put off what can be done today tomorrow.Laziness will not only bring us the failure, but lead us to the road to poverty and even deaths.

   The following people are expressing their thoughts (61--65) to show their concern for food, environment and so on.After that are pieces of related information (A--F) .Now decide which piece of information would be most suitable for the thought and idea mentioned in questions 61---65 and mark your answer letter (A---F) on your answer sheet.There is one extra paragraph which you do not need to use.

______61.How I was struck by the clear water and fresh air in my childhood! But everything has changed, that is, the clear water and fresh air are nowhere to be found again as they were.Above all, a great deal of waste hardly rots away.

______62.More and more people are beginning to have a good knowledge of the importance of a safer and cleaner environment, which in turn forces the business to be cleaned up.

______63.Organic products are getting more and more popular among people, but we should know the fact that organic products might also have something to do with pesticides.

______64.I’m very much fond of growing some vegetables of my own in my small garden, for many vegetables on sale in markets are actually becoming more and more dangerous as a result of widespread pesticides.

______65.Nowadays it is very convenient for consumers to find and buy green food in supermarkets as they are clearly marked.

       A.“Organic (有机的) produce is always better, "Gold said." The food is free of pesticides (农药),  and you are generally supporting family farms instead of large farms.And more often than not it is locally grown and seasonal, so it is more tasty.” Gold is one of a growing number of shoppers buying into the organic trend, and supermarkets across Britain are counting on more like him as they grow their organic food business.

       B.Market research shows that Gold and others who buy organic food can generally give clear reasons for their preferences — but their knowledge of organic food is far from complete.For example, small amounts of pesticides can be used on organic products.And about three quarters of organic food in Britain is not local but imported to meet growing deman    d. "The demand for organic food is increasing by about one third every year, so it is a very fast-growing market, "said Sue Flock, a specialist in this line of business.

       C.Many cities around the world today are heavily polluted. Careless methods of production and lack of consumer demand for environment-friendly products have contributed to the pollution problem.One result is that millions of tons of glass, paper, plastic, and metal containers are produced, and these are difficult to get rid of.

       D.However, today, more and more consumers are choosing "green" and demanding that the products they buy should be safe for the environment.Before they buy a product, they ask questions like these: "Will this shampoo damage the environment?"  "Can this metal container be reused or can it only be used once?

E.Only a few years ago, it was impossible to find green products in supermarkets, but now there are hundreds.Some supermarket products carry labels(标签) to show that the product is green.Some companies have made the manufacturing (制造) of clean and safe products their main selling point and emphasize it in their advertising.

F.The concern for a safer and cleaner environment is making companies rethink how they do business.No longer will the public accept the old attitude of "Buy it, use it, throw it away, and forget it." The public pressure is on, and gradually business is cleaning up its act.

ATLANTA, Georgia--- Alternative medicine --- including yoga, meditation, herbs(草药)and the Atkins diet(艾特金斯饮食法)---appears to be growing in popularity in the United States, perhaps because of dissatisfaction with conventional care, the government said Thursday.

       More than a third of American adults used such practices in 2002, according to the government survey of 31,000 people, the largest study on non-conventional medical approaches in the United States.If prayer is included, about 62 percent of U.S.adults used some form of alternative medicine.

       The results seem to indicate more people are turning to alternative medicine, though the 2002 survey could not be directly compared to previous studies because of differences in size and survey methods, health officials said.

       The top alternative therapies(疗法)included prayer (43 percent of adults) , natural products(19 percent), meditation(8 percent)and diets such as Atkins, Ornish, or the Zone (4 percent).More people also are using natural products such as herbs or enzymes(酶)to treat chronic or recurring pain(慢性或经常性疼痛), said Richard Nahin of the National Center for Complementary and Alternative Medicine, part of the National Institutes of Health.

       “Many conditions are not easily treated with conventional medicine,” Nahin sad. “It may be the public that is turning to complementary(补充的)and alternative medicine because it’s not getting relief from conventional medicine.”

       But people should not be turning away from conventional treatments that are proven safe, said Dr.Stephen Straus, director of the alternative medicine center.

“People are making individual decisions to neglect those therapies and we have concerns about those choices,” he said.

       Health officials said they were concerned that 13 percent of those surveyed said they turned to alternative medicine because regular medicine is too expensive.

       “It needs to be explored ---we need to find out whether they were insured or not” Nahin said.

Health officials also were surprised that 6.6 percent of those surveyed used the supplement kava(卡瓦提取物), which has been associated with liver disease.

       “People make the assumption that because something is natural that it’s safe” Nahin said.       “But a number of studies have shown that natural products can be unsafe when used inappropriately or with other drugs.”

He said people considering using alternative medicine should consult their doctor first.

57.Which can be used as the proper title for the passage?

      A.Differences between alternative medicine and conventional medicine

       B.Comparison of the effects of different medicine

       C.Conventional care remains to be most acceptable

       D.Alternative medicine becomes more popular

58.From the passage we know that most people choose alternative medicine _________.

       A.because it has been proven safe to take

      B.because experts confirm it all sidedly

      C.because they are not satisfied with the conventional medicine

      D.because conventional medicine is expensive

59.What can probably be inferred from the passage?

      A.Most patients are blind in taking alternative medicine or conventional care.

       B.Experts still haven’t drawn an all-round and exact conclusion about alternative medicine.

      C.Alternative medicine will eventually take place of conventional care.

      D.Natural herbs are safer than the medicine processed by man.

60.Which of the following agrees with the article?

      A.Experts will carry out further studies on alternative medicine.

      B.Health officials are worried that using the alternative medicine will be remove D.

      C.The supplement kava is more effective to anxiety disease.

      D.Natural products have an advantage over conventional care.

 “Image is everything.” An entire industry has been built upon the precondition that image is everything, but when it comes down to it, an appealing image is not enough.If there is no substance behind the image, the product, service or person will fail at length.

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       First of all, one should consider how important image is in the selling of products and services.Advertising agencies have raised the art of creating an image to a state of near perfection.Public concept of that product or service is certainly managed by the images created by the advertising agencies.But if the product or service does not live up to the image that was created, the customer will be very dissatisfied and possibly ask for their money back.For example, the Arthur Andersen accounting firm had spent decades building up an image of trustworthiness.But the recent scandal (丑闻) showed that behind that image, it had dishonest business practices.Despite the previous positive image, the firm is being accused of criminal actions and it will probably not survive as a business unit.Although the image had been nearly perfect, the reality behind the image has led to the downfall of the world famous accounting firm.

       Similarly, personal consultants can build up a public image for politicians and movie stars.Putting out positive news releases, making sure that only the best photographs are published, and ensuring that the person is seen in all the right places can build up a very positive image in the view of the general commons.But once again, history is filled with examples of both politicians and movie stars that fell from grace (体面) like the story of the Hollywood actor giving in to the pressures of fame and fortune.With people, just as with products and services, image is certainly important, but without positive substance behind the image, failure is close.

       To summarize, it is clear that an appealing image is extremely important to success, whether that image is related to selling a product or service or to the "selling" of a person.But image is only half of the equation.What lies behind that image is every bit as important as the image itself—the person or product must deliver on that image or there is little chance for long-term success.

53.The downfall of the Arthur Andersen accounting firm is due to ______.

     A.its dishonesty in business                   B.its previous images

       C.its bad management                   D.its poor service

54.Why did some famous people fall from grace?

A.Their images were not well built up.              

B.They failed to live up to their images.

C.They felt much pressure from the public.            

D.They paid little attention to fame and fortune.

 
55. The structure of the passage is             .

56.The author tries to argue that______.

    A.image creates everything                   B.image is the key to success

    C.truth goes hand in hand with image        D.truth and image are equally important

Not long ago, people thought babies were not able to learn things until they were five or six months old. Yet doctors in the United States say babies begin learning on their first day of life.

       Scientists note that babies are strongly influenced by their environment.They say a baby will smile if her mother does something the baby likes.A baby learns to get the best care possible by smiling to please her mother or other caregiver.This is how babies learn to connect and communicate with other human beings.

       One study shows that babies can learn before they are born.The researchers placed a tape recorder on the stomach of a pregnant woman.Then, they played a recording of a short story. On the day the baby was born, the researchers attempted to find if he knew the sounds of the story repeated while in his mother.They did this by placing a device in the mouth of the newborn baby.

       The baby would hear the story if he moved his mouth one way.If the baby moved his mouth the other way, he would hear a different story.The researchers say the baby clearly liked the story he heard before he was born.They say the baby would move his mouth so he could hear the story again and again.

       Another study shows how mothers can strongly influence social development and language skills in their children.

       Researchers studied the children from the age of one month to three years.The researchers attempted to measure the sensitivity of the mothers.The women were considered sensitive if they supported their children’s activities and did not interfere unnecessarily.They tested the children for thinking and language development when they were three years old. Also, the researchers observed the women for signs of depression.

       The children of depressed women did not do as well in tests as the children of women who did not suffer from depression.The children of depressed women did poorly in tests of language skills and understanding what they hear.

       These children also were less cooperative and had more problems dealing with other people.The researchers noted that the sensitivity of the mothers was important to the intelligence development of their children.Children did better when their mothers were caring, even when they suffered from depression.

49.According to the passage, which of the following is NOT the factor that influences intelligence development in babies?

      A.The environment.                              B.Mother’s sensitivity.               

       C.Their peers (同龄人)                      D.Education before birth.

50.What is the purpose of the experiment in which newborn babies heard the stories?

      A.To prove that babies can learn before they are born.

      B.To prove that babies can learn on the first day they are born.

      C.To show mothers can strongly influence intelligence development in their babies.

      D.To indicate early education has a deep effect on the babies’ language skills.

51.Which group of children did the worst in tests of language skills?

      A.The children of women who did not suffer from depression.

      B.The children of depressed but caring mothers.

       C.Children with high communication abilities.

       D.The children of depressed mothers who cared little for their children.

52.What is the main idea of the passage?

      A.Scientific findings about how babies develop before birth.

      B.Scientific findings about how the environment has an effect on babies’ intelligence.

      C.A study shows babies are not able to learn things until they are five or six months ol  D.

      D.Scientific findings about how intelligence develops in babies.

This hotel in the trees is famous in the world. Peop1e who know very little about Kenya, know of Treetops.When King George VI died, Princess Elizabeth was staying on the Treetops, and when she came down from there, “She succeeded in as the queen of the country”.This hotel in the middle of the forest shows the pleasure of Africa. When you visit it, you will be sent into the heart of the forest by hotel buses, and then a guide, with a gun to protect you against big game, will go with you to the Treetops.Before and after dinner, for the whole night if you wish, you can sit on the corridor, watching animals come to the water pool.The earliest hotel Treetops was built round a large tree on the opposite side of the water, but that was destroyed by fire and the new hotel Treetops, which is built round several trees, is much bigger.

      The dining room at Treetops is small, and the waiters cannot walk round to serve guests, a clever “railway service” has been invented. Guests take their food as it passes slowly in front of them, along a line in the center of the table.

      There are many animals around the Treetops.When you visit them, you can see:

    ---Animals and their babies are waiting to greet the guests.

    ---Animals, enjoying the Treetops pool in the daylight.

    ---A long bodied, long ring tailed very active cat-like animal is a special one coming out at night.He hunts and eats anything he can overpower and is very destructive.He lives in the trees at Treetops .He comes for his food every evening.Do not get too near to him, as his teeth and claws can do you harm.These animals can be trained and become lovely pets.

    ---Some other animals who have a thick coating of fur to keep them warm in the cold forest nights.

       ---Many buffaloes coming to the Treetops for water and salt during the day or night.

45.“She succeeded in becoming the queen of the country.” In this sentence, “succeeded” means_______.

       A.did what she was trying to do              B.gained her purpose

       C.got a position on the death of the King   D.completed an easy task

46.Which of the following statements about “the cat-like animal”, described in the passage, is NOT true?

       A.It comes for food only at night.         

       B.It lives in the trees at Treetops.

       C.Its teeth and claws can do people harm.           

       D.It can catch any other animal in the forest.

47.According to the passage.Treetops is famous in the world because ________.

       A.it shows the pleasure of America

       B.Princess Elizabeth got to the crown when coming down from there

       C.it is built round several trees

       D.there are many animals that can be trained and become lovely pets

48.We can learn from the passage, that the guests ________.

       A.should not play games on the Treetops              B.could not sit on the corridor at night

       C.could enjoy their dinner in the dining room        D.should keep off the cat-like animals

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