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Patience is of great important in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past,but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed,I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute,I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus,I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possibly waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience,I’ll think of this experience.

  Nowadays,there is a heated debate on whether pollutants should be cleaned in the air. Cleaning up the air,while good for our lungs,could make global warming worse. And the pollutants still go up around the air,along with carbon dioxide.

  These pollutants are called aerosols and they include soot as well as mixtures of nitrogen (氮) and sulfur (硫) and other stuff into the air. Natalie Mahowald,a climate researcher at Cornell University,says,so far,scientists have mostly tried to understand what those aerosols do while they’re actually in the air.

  “There are so many different kinds of aerosols,” she says. “Some are warm and some are cool. But in fact,humans are giving out a lot of extra aerosols,and they tend to cool for the most part. ”

  The aerosols reflect sunlight back into space,or keep us cool. But it turns out that’s not all they do. These aerosols also influence how much carbon dioxide gets drawn out of the air by plants on land and in the sea.

  “They can add nutrients,for example,to the ocean or to the land ,” Mahowald says. “But also while they’re in the atmosphere they can change the climate,and thus that also can influence the amount of carbon,the land or the ocean can take up. So there are quite a few different ways that aerosols can act on each other. ”

Mahowald’s results suggest that reducing those pollutants could be an even bigger problem than realized,when you consider that aerosols help remove carbon dioxide from the air by encouraging plant growth. Hard numbers on this effect are highly uncertain at the moment,but this could turn out to be quite significant.

  And studying it is not easy because the effects aren’t well understood. For example,nitrogen can be a fertilizer (肥料) , but it can stop plant growing when nitrogen comes out of the air in acid form.

  Right now it seems like we’re much more likely to clean up aerosol pollution,while increasing the amount of carbon dioxide in the air. So scientists,unfortunately,may have a chance to see whether this experiment on our planet should continue or not.

(   ) 5. From Paragraph 2,we know that     .

   A. scientists have been aware of how aerosols work

   B. Natalie Mahowald is an expert in climate

   C. cleaning up the air is so popular

   D. pollutants are under control so far

(   ) 6. What does the last sentence of the passage imply?

   A. Scientists will be in a dilemma.

   B. The experiment will be successful.

   C. Scientists will carry out the experiment.

   D. Scientists have difficulty in the experiment.

(   ) 7. Which of the following can be the best title of this passage?

   A. Pollutants in the Air

   B. The Experiment on the Planet

   C. The Reason for Global Warming

   D. The Influence of Aerosols

 Downing the last drop of an expensive famous brand H₂0 as well as remembering to throw the empty bottle in the recycling bin,makes you feel pretty good about yourself,right? It shouldn’t. Even when the bottles are recycled,there are all kinds of other consequences of swallowing bottled waterways Melissa Peffers,the air-quality programme manager for Environmental Defense.

  The containers are often filled in faraway lands,then shipped from abroad,and stored in refrigerators at your local store. Compare that with the influence on environment of turning on your tap,filling a glass,and drinking up!

  Anyone who is choosing bottled water for health reasons is misguided,says Peffers.   “Most bottled water is just tap water. ”And what comes out of your tap is carefully monitored to follow the strict rules. Consider another fact that bottled water is surprisingly expensive,especially when compared with the alternative,which is almost free,and it is astonishing that America’s desire for bottled water seems impossible to satisfy,reaching nearly 30 billion bottles a year.

  “My parents’ generation never had bottled water”’says Isabelle Silverman,an Environmental Defense legal adviser. She has made a commitment to going bottle free.   “You don’t need to fetch it home from the store,and it’s cheaper,” she adds.

Bottled water’s role as a status symbol needs to change,Peffers points out. So when a waiter at an expensive restaurant offers“And what’s your drink?”that,no reason to forget your conviction (信念) .“Don’t be afraid to say, ‘I’ll have tap. ’ Say it loud enough that the other tables nearby can hear you”’Peffers says. “And then spend that money on a dessert. ”

(   ) 1. In the first paragraph,the underlined sentence “It shouldn’t, ”suggests that people     .

   A. shouldn’t feel pleased with finishing the water in the bottle

   B. shouldn’t feel good about drinking an expensive brand H₂0

   C. shouldn’t be content with just recycling empty bottles

   D. shouldn’t be satisfied with drinking only bottled water

(   ) 2. According to the author,tap water is     .

   A. as safe as bottled water

   B. more likely to be polluted

   C. healthier than bottled water

   D. less convenient than bottled water

(   ) 3. The underlined part “going bottle free”(in Para. 4)means “        

   A. making bottled water free

   B. abandoning bottled water

   C. recycling used water bottles

   D. providing free water containers

(   ) 4. Why does Peffers ask people to say “I’ll have tap. ”

loudly?

   A. To encourage them to set an example for others to follow.

   B. To advise them to save the money for one more dessert.

   C. To remind them to be aware of their social status.

   D. To persuade them to speak confidently in public.

   Great changes have taken place in the countryside in our country.

  As a child,I lived in a poor family. The second hand clothes,the rain-leaking roof of the old house became part of my memory.1.     ，the worst impression is that I

2.         (feel) hungry all the time. Sometimes hunger hit me so severely 3.        I regarded dried sweet potato slices as delicious snack. At that time,my dream was getting  enough to fill my empty stomach. 

  In the early years of the 1980s,as the reform and opening-up policy 4.        (carry) out,our dream came true.And then,5.        dream became clearer and clearer in my mind. I must try my best to escape out of my poor and backward hometown. I worked 6.      (hard) at my study than most of my classmates,and,after luckily 7.      (succeed) in the national College Entrance Ex amination,I realized my dream again： after graduation,I became a citizen working in a city.8.      the first college graduate out of a remote village,my success set 9.      example for my folks. They came to realize that schooling is a good way to change one’s fate (命运).In the following years,there were fewer drop-outs and more college graduates in my village,10.      I am proud of even today.

 One morning I stood beside the window. Across the river,the 1        decorated the edge of the shore in white. I stood 2        and looked at what the night’s storm had 3     .

  I leaned forward and stood close to the window. There was a goose out there,quite 4     ,its wings folded to its sides,its feet 5        to the ice. Then from the dark skies,I saw a line of swans. They moved in their own 6        style,graceful and free.

As I watched,the leader 7        from the sky and landed on the ice. As the swans surrounded the frozen goose,I 8        it might be killed by those great beaks (鸟瞭).

  9      instead,those beaks began to work on the 10     .

The long necks were lifted and curved down,again and again. At last,the goose’s head 11     its body pulled. Then the goose was 12        and standing on the ice. And the swans stood in the air 13        It seemed as if the goose was crying, “I cannot fly. ” Four of the swans came down around it. Their powerful beaks cleaned the goose’s 14      from top to bottom,chipping off the ice held in the feathers.

  15      at last the goose’s wings were free,the four swans 16        and joined the group. They restarted their eastward journey cheerfully.

  I watched them until they 17        over the tops of the farthest trees. Only then did I realize that 18        were running down my cheeks. Believe me!This story is 19      . And I will ask, “If so for birds why not for 20        ?”

(   ) 1. A. flower   B. tree

   C. snow   D. picture

(   ) 2. A. quietly   B. silently

   C. happily   D. nervously

(   ) 3. A. washed   B. painted

   C. destroyed   D. cleaned

(   ) 4. A. hungry   B. thirsty

   C. terrible   D. still

(   ) 5. A. frozen   B. put

   C. turned   D. tied

(   ) 6. A. common   B. ordinary

   C. noticeable   D. boring

(   ) 7. A. dived   B. moved

   C. flew   D. circled

(   ) 8. A. frightened   B. feared

   C. hoped   D. knew

(   ) 9. A. Wonderfully   B. Puzzlingly

   C. Surprisingly   D. Disappointingly

(   ) 10. A. ice   B. earth

   C. goose   D. swan

(   ) 11. A. carried   B. pushed

   C. moved   D. lifted

(   ) 12. A. glad   B. sad

   C. free   D. lucky

(   ) 13. A. listening   B. hearing

   C. fighting   D. watching

(   ) 14. A. head   B. legs

   C. feathers   D. body

(   ) 15. A. While   B. When

   C. Before   D. Although

(   ) 16. A. took off   B. took up

   C. got away   D. got up

(   ) 17. A. climbed   B. stopped

   C. disappeared   D. landed

(   ) 18. A. leaves   B. hairs

   C. rivers   D. tears

(   ) 19. A. actual   B. real

   C. true   D. right

(   ) 20. A. animals   B. man

   C. people   D. insects

 There is one thing that everyone wants more than anything else.1.     They think that when they have enough money to buy such things as houses,farms,and cars,they will have the thing that everyone wants.

  Other people believe that if they know enough they will find this thing.2.      Still others think that if they have power,they will find this thing. Some people keep telling themselves:“When I'm a boss,I will no longer have to search for this thing. ”

  What is it that everyone wants more than anything else? What is it that all of us keep working and striving (奋斗) for each day?3.      Happiness is a strange thing.4.     What will make one man happy may not make another man happy. Some men say that happiness comes from helping others;other men say that happiness comes from making life more pleasant for everyone. What do you mean when you say “That makes me happy. ”？ 5.       Per haps you will learn something that will bring you peace of mind,comfort,money or it may be what you search for—happiness.

    A. It is happiness.

   B. It does not mean the same to all men.

   C. They study all their life in search of it.

   D. Happiness means the same to everyone.

   E. Some people try to get it by making money.

   F. When one man feels happy,another man will feel sad.

   G. Read what different people have said about happiness.

 Cheating is nothing new. But today,the Administrative Department for Education finds that examples of academic dishonesty on the part of students have become more frequent—and are less likely to be punished--than in the past. Cheating appears to have gained acceptance among good and poor students alike.

  Why is student cheating on the rise? No one really knows. Some blame the trend on a general loosening of moral values among today’s youth. Others have attributed (归因于) increased cheating to the fact that today’s youth are far more practical than their idealistic ancestors. Whereas in the late sixties and early seventies,students were filled with visions about changing the world,today’s students feel great pressure to survive and succeed. In interviews with students at high schools and colleges around the country,both young men and women said that cheating had become easy. Some suggested they did it out of hate for teachers they didn’t respect. Others looked at it as a game. Only if they were caught,some said,would they feel guilty. “People are com-petitive ,” said a second-year college student named Anna,from Chicago. “There is a potential fear. If you don’t do well,your life is going to be ruined. The pressure is not only from parents and friends but from yourself. To achieve. To succeed. It’s almost as though we have to surpass people to achieve our own goals. ”

  Edward Wynne,editor of a magazine blames the rise in academic dishonesty in the schools. He claims that administrators and teachers have been too hesitant to take action. Dwight Huber,chairman of the English Department at Amarillo sees the matter differently,blaming the rise in cheating on the way students evaluated. “I would cheat if I felt I was being cheated ,” Mr Huber said. He feels that as long as teachers give short-answer tests rather than essay questions and rate students by the number of facts they can memorize rather than by how well they can combine and process information,students will try to beat the system. “The concept of cheating is based on the false belief that the system is legal and there is something wrong with the individuals who’re doing it ,”he said, “that’s too easy an answer. We’ve got to start looking at the system. ”

(   ) 1. Educators are finding that students who cheat      

   A. have poor academic records

   B. use the information in late years

   C. can be academically weak or strong

   D. are more likely to be punished than before

(   ) 2. Which of the following statements reflects the in formation in the passage?

   A. The pressure students faced with is partly the reason causing the student cheating.

   B. Only the educational system and administrators are to blame for the rise in the cheating.

   C. The 1960s’ visions of changing the world helped students never make mistakes.

   D. Punishment for cheaters has always been severe in this country.

(   ) 3. The underlined words “the individuals”in the last paragraph refer to       

   A. students who practise cheating

   B. parents who put pressure on their children

   C. school administrators who approve of short-answer tests

   D. teachers who are too hesitant to take action against cheating

(   ) 4. The author probably would agree with the point of view that        .

   A. students who cheat should be driven out of school

   B. parents alone must take responsibility for the rise in student cheating

   C. the educational system is sound,and students must follow every rule

   D. the educational system in this country would benefit from a thorough evaluation

假如你是高一新生李华，从学校贴吧(post bar) 里获知学校广播部(the broadcasting station) 正从高一新生中招收新成员，要求嗓音好、普通话标准且有奉献精神。你希望加人广播部。请用英语写一封申请信，要点如下：

1. 个人基本情况及联系方式(电话：5103123,邮箱：li-hual01 @hotmail. com) ;

2. 满足加人广播部的条件；

3. 加入广播部的目的(提升能力；拓宽知识) 。

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3. 开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数。

Dear Sir/Madam,

Very glad to know in the post bar that our broadcasting station needs new members this term.

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Everyone in our village likes my father,so he has a sense of humour. On other words,he can make others laugh easy and people feel happy to be around him. I admire him very much and dream of that some day I will be as humorous as him. I even asked him how have a good sense of humour,but what she replied disappointed me. “Not someone can be humorous,because those who is humorous are usually born to be humorous”’he said. However,later,he adds ,“But you can be humorous too if you know a lot of joke. ”That’s why now I’m reading a book of jokes.

  At present time,roller skating (滑旱冰) is easy and fun. But many years ago,it wasn’t easy at all. Before 1750,people never tried skating on wheels. That changed because of a man named Joseph Merlin. Merlin’s work was making instru-ments (工具In his free time he liked to play the violin. Merlin was a man with many ideas and many dreams. People called him a dreamer.

  One day Merlin received an invitation to go to an important party. He was very pleased and a little excited. As the day of the party came near,Merlin began to think. He wanted to find a way to make a wonderful entrance at the party. Merlin had an idea. He thought that he would attract much attention if he could skate into the room.

  Merlin tried different ways to make himself roll (滚动) • Finally,he decided to put two wheels under each shoe. These were the first roller skate shoes. Merlin was very proud of them. He dreamed of arriving at the party and skating into the room while playing the violin. He was sure that everyone would be very surprised.

  On the night of the party Merlin rolled into the room,playing his violin. Everyone was really surprised to see him. There was just one problem. Merlin had no way to stop his roller skating. He rolled on,playing the violin. Then,with all eyes on him,Merlin hit into a huge mirror on the wall. The mirror broke into many pieces with a very loud noise.

  Nobody forgot Merlin’s wonderful entrance after that.

(   ) 5. The first paragraph tells us that people began to skate on wheels from 1750 because (of)        .

   A. it was very easy

   B. it was very exciting

   C. Joseph Merlin’s instruments

   D. it was very popular

(   ) 6. People called Merlin a dreamer because      .

   A. he slept and dreamed a lot

   B. he was full of different ideas and dreams

   C. he invented the first roller skates

   D. he always made people’s dreams come true

(   ) 7.       made Merlin think of skating on wheels.

   A. Merlin’s work

   B. Merlin’s violin

   C. A huge mirror

   D. An important party

(   ) 8. What’s the best title for the passage?

   A. Joseph Merlin’s Story

   B. How Roller Skating Was Invented

   C. A Surprising Entrance to the Party

   D. Violin and Roller Skating