Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的新西兰笔友Lessie即将来中国做交换生，来信请你给他推荐几个中文名字。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：

1. 表示欢迎并乐于推荐；

2. 介绍中文名字的特点；

3. 告知他查看邮箱附件中所建议的名字。

注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

邮箱附件E-mail attachment

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Lessie,

Hearing that you will come to China as an exchange student, I want to express a warm welcome to you. I’m very glad that you wish to have a Chinese name. There is no doubt that it will help you better fit in with the Chinese culture.

A Chinese name usually consists of two or three characters, which often contain some special meanings, expectations or blessings. However, unlike an English name, the family name of Chinese is usually put first and then a given name follows. In addition, I have come up with several Chinese names, which are added to the E-mail attachment.

I hope you will like one of them and have a good time in China.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文。要求写一封信。

第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，1. 表示欢迎并乐于推荐；2. 介绍中文名字的特点；3. 告知他查看邮箱附件中所建议的名字。第二，人称为第一人称和第三人称。第三，时态以一般现在时为主。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，表示欢迎并乐于推荐。第二段，介绍中文名字的特点；告知他查看邮箱附件中所建议的名字。第三段，表达希望。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: an exchange student，express a warm welcome to，fit in with ， Chinese culture，consist of，some special meanings, expectations or blessing，the family name， come up with，the E-mail attachment。

第四步：确定较为高级的句子:现在分词作状语和that 引导的宾语从句Hearing that you will come to China as an exchange student, I want to express a warm welcome to you. that引导的同位语从句There is no doubt that it will help you better fit in with the Chinese culture. which引导的非限制性定语从句A Chinese name usually consists of two or three characters, which often contain some special meanings, expectations or blessings。

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接: However，In addition。

第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。