Question

【题目】假如你是李华,最近对你校的高三学生的体育活动现状进行了调查。请根据下列图示,用英语写一篇报告,并简要陈述你的观点。

注意:1.词数:100字左右。

2.文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。

3.词汇提示:设施facility

Recently I made a survey of Senior 3 students on physical training.

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Answer 1

【答案】Recently I made a survey of Senior 3 students on physical training.65% of the students surveyed don’t do sports.There are many reasons for this.Half of the students say they have too much homework and have no enough time to take exercise.30% of them complain that they have no places where they can relax themselves and that there are not enough training facilities.10% feel that they live too far away from the places and some even don’t know how to take exercise.Because of lack of physical activities,many students are in poor health.We should realize the importance of taking exercise,and measures should be taken to improve the present situation.

【解析】

本文为图表作文。图表式作文是说明文的一种。图表作文是将数据表中的信息转化成作文的一种形式。表可分为表格、柱状图、饼状图及拆线图。表格形式要求考生对表格中所出的大量数了进行了比较分析，从中找出其变化规律，并用文字进行描述。图表作文一般三部分按写：1、按照题目要求描述图表反映的总情况，即概括大意或总趋势。2、对数字进行仔细的比较，分析其差异、归纳其变化。第3、找出产生的变化及原因。

本文要点完整，表达到位。结构合理，层次清晰，观点明确，发挥合理，逻辑严密。句式相对较为复杂。使用非谓语，文中的the students surveyed就是非谓语中的过去分词作定语。有复杂句Half of the students say they have too much homework and have no enough time to take exercise.30% of them complain that they have no places where they can relax themselves and that there are not enough training facilities，这个复杂句中有两个由that引导的宾语从句和一个由where引导的定语从句。文中有四处复合句：Half of the students say they have too much homework…;;30% of them complain that they have no places where they can relax themselves and that there are not enough training facilities；10% feel that they live too far away from the places and some even don’t know how to take exercise及宾语从句。We should realize the importance of taking exercise,and measures should be taken to improve the present situation.这些句式的运用，使文章逻辑严密，紧凑。