题目内容
19.假设你是李华,正在英国伦敦参加夏令营.请给在该市的网友Jack写一封电子邮件,说明你想与他见面,并去参观他的学校.同时告诉他,你准备了中国结作为礼物赠送给他,感谢他在网上解答你在英语学习上的问题.注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.参考词汇:中国结:Chinese knot
Dear Jack,
How are you doing these days?
I'm writing this letter to tell you I'm at a summer camp in London now,and I think it's a good chance for us to meet and have a talk.(高分句型一)You know,I always want to know what your school is like and I'm also very curious about your school life.(高分句型二)If convenient,it will be great to visit your school during my stay in London.
By the way,I bring a small gift for you,which is a fine Chinese knot.(高分句型三)I really thank you for your patient and clear explanation of my questions on English learning before.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
LiHua.
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息假设你是李华,正在英国伦敦参加夏令营.请给在该市的网友Jack写一封电子邮件,说明你想与他见面,并去参观他的学校.同时告诉他,你准备了中国结作为礼物赠送给他,感谢他在网上解答你在英语学习上的问题.写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息 2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:be curious about 对…好奇;By the way顺便说一下;look forward to 盼望;If convenient如果方便的话;
I'm writing this letter to tell you I'm at a summer camp in London now,and I think it's a good chance for us to meet and have a talk.(高分句型一)
You know,I always want to know what your school is like and I'm also very curious about your school life.(高分句型二)
By the way,I bring a small gift for you,which is a fine Chinese knot.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Jack,
How are you doing these days?
I'm writing this letter to tell you I'm at a summer camp in London now,and I think it's a good chance for us to meet and have a talk.(高分句型一)You know,I always want to know what your school is like and I'm also very curious about your school life.(高分句型二)If convenient,it will be great to visit your school during my stay in London.
By the way,I bring a small gift for you,which is a fine Chinese knot.(高分句型三)I really thank you for your patient and clear explanation of my questions on English learning before.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
| A. | whose | B. | who | C. | where | D. | which |
| A. | being intended | B. | intending | C. | intended | D. | to intend |
This question of giving up seats in public transport is much argued about by young men,who say that since women have claimed equality,they no longer deserve to be treated with politeness and that those who go out to work should take their turns in the rat race like anyone else.But women have never claimed to be physically strong as men.Even if it is not agreed,however,the fact remains that courtesy(礼节) should be shown to the old and the sick.Are we really so lost to all ideals of unselfishness that we can sit there indifferently(冷漠地) reading the paper or a book,saying to ourselves,"First come,first served"while a grey-haired woman,a mother with a young child or a cripple(残障者) stands?Yet this is all too often seen.
Older people,tired and impatient from a day's work,are not always considerate either-far from it.Many arguments break out as the older people push and squeeze(挤)each other to get on buses.One cannot approve this,of course,but one does feel there is just a little more excuse.
It seems urgent,not only that communications in transport should be improved,but also that communication between human beings should be kept smooth and polite.All over cities,it seems that people are too tired and too rushed to be polite.Shop assistants won't bother to assist; taxi drivers shout at each other as they dash dangerously around corners; bus conductors pull the bell before their desperate passengers have time to get on or off the bus,and so on.It seems to us that it is up to the young to do their small part to stop such lowering of moral standards.
Title:Manners in Metropolitan Cities
| Theme | Politeness is (76)non-existent,especially in large cities. | |
| Phenomena and Excuses | Phenomena | Excuses |
| Big,strong schoolboys push elderly women aside to (77)sit on the last remaining seats. | ||
| Young men (78)refuse/hate/dislike to treat women politely. | Women think they are(79)equalto men,so they should take their turns in the rat race like others. | |
| Young people sit indifferently (80)indifferently while grey-haired women,mothers with (81)children/babiesand disabled people stand by. | First come,first served. | |
| The elderly themselves push each other to get on buses. | ||
| (82)Causes/Analysis | ●Communications in transport are not satisfactory. ●Communication between people doesn't go (83)smoothly and politely. ●People are too (84)tired and too rushed to care about others. | |
| Solution | Young people make an (85)effort to stop such lowering of moral standards. | |
-Impossible!He his car last night.( )
| A. | has fixed | B. | had fixed | C. | would fix | D. | was fixing |