Question

【题目】假设你是王森，十一月二十一日是你在美国的笔友汤姆的生日。你给他寄了一盒中国的绿茶（green tea）作为生日礼物。现在，请你用英语写一封110字左右的信给他，祝贺他生日快乐，并根据下面的六幅图和提示词语详细描绘一下怎么沏茶。

提示词：壶 kettle茶匙 teaspoon茶壶 teapot

茶叶 tea-leaves 茶杯 teacup 茶壶盖 lid

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

How is it going? Your birthday is approaching. I wish you a happy birthday! Please allow me to send you a box of Chinese green tea as a gift for your birthday．

I’d like to tell you how to make the tea. First, fill a kettle with cold water and heat the water. Wait until the water is boiling. While waiting, place one teaspoon of tealeaves into the teapot. Then, pour the boiling water form the kettle onto the leaves in the pot. Leave for a few minutes before serving. Finally, Pour the tea into a teacup. Depending on the tea, you might add sugar, milk, or honey. Keep the pot covered with a lid to keep the tea warm, and enjoy it．

I hope you’ll accept it and like it．

Truly yours

Wang Sen

【解析】

这是一篇看图写作题。根据所给图片以及词汇来详细描述一下怎么沏茶。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文（看图写作）

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。

要求：1.表达问候以及祝愿（I wish you a happy birthday!）

2.描述沏茶的过程（how to make the tea.）

3.希望对方喜欢

第二步:列提纲 （重点单词及词组）

approach; allow sb to do; fill with; while doing; pour into; depending on;be covered with

第三步：连词成句

1. Your birthday is approaching

2. Please allow me to send you a box of Chinese green tea as a gift for your birthday

3. fill a kettle with cold water and heat the water.

4. While waiting, place one teaspoon of tealeaves into the teapot.

5. Pour the tea into a teacup.

6. Depending on the tea, you might add sugar, milk, or honey

7. Keep the pot covered with a lid to keep the tea warm, and enjoy it

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

第五步：润色修改

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，