Question

7．When was the last time you had fun with your parents？Your parents are all busy during working days； during the weekends，you may want to hang out with them but they may have to work extra hours．
This is not uncommon．In China，both of the parents have their jobs．Most of the parents try their best to offer their children comfortable circumstances，but they seldom have time to stay with their children．A recent survey done in the US found that more than half of American parents spend less than three hours having fun with their children each week．
As the Daily Mail noted：Families are spending little quality time creating bonds and precious memories together during the week because of the demands of modern life．

【写作内容】
1．用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；
2．简要分析父母陪伴孩子的时间越来越少的原因；
3．结合自己的经历，谈谈父母多陪伴孩子对其孩子的影响．
【写作要求】
1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3．不必写标题．
Suggested version：
Nowadays，it is not uncommon that parents spend little time accompanying their children，which may result from the demands of modern life and some other reasons．（26）
There are many factors accounting for this phenomenon．First，in contemporary society parents are facing more stress from living and work than before，so they have to spend most of their time making money．In addition，parents today are more easily distracted by various electronic products when keeping their children company．
Take my own experience for example．Once upon a time，I got into trouble in my studies．It was my parents'company and comfort that had a great effect on my regaining self-confidence．Plain and peaceful as it was，this experience left an unforgettable impression on me，which is of great significance to my growth．．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
Nowadays，it is not uncommon that parents spend little time accompanying their children，which may result from the demands of modern life and some other reasons
如今，父母很少花时间陪伴孩子，这可能是现代生活的需要和其他原因造成的．这是很平常的．
高分句型二：
In addition，parents today are more easily distracted by various electronic products when keeping their children company．
另外，现在的家长更容易被各种电子产品吸引在陪伴孩子时．

解答 Suggested version：
     Nowadays，it is not uncommon that parents spend little time accompanying their children，which may result from the demands of modern life and some other reasons（高分句型一）．
    There are many factors accounting for this phenomenon．First，in contemporary society parents are facing more stress from living and work than before，so they have to spend most of their time making money．In addition，parents today are more easily distracted by various electronic products when keeping their children company（高分句型二）．
    Take my own experience for example．Once upon a time，I got into trouble in my studies．It was my parents'company and comfort that had a great effect on my regaining self-confidence．Plain and peaceful as it was，this experience left an unforgettable impression on me，which is of great significance to my growth．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．