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短文改错。
     假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共
有l0 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( ＼) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
      The first time when I went on a plane was when I went to Hong Kong with my Dad.
When I saw the plane, I thought it was very big. But when there was a lot of passengers seating
on the plane, it wasn’t very big any more. It could carry lots of people and baggages. That was 
so amazed! When the plane flew up into sky, my ears started to hurt. It hurt me very much 
that I wanted to cry. I said to myself, “Don’t cry. I can’t cry.” But I couldn’t hold back from my
tears. “If you chewed a piece of gum, it will stop the harm,” dad said. When I heard that my dad 
said, I chewed a piece of gum.

     The first time when I went on a plane was when I went to Hong Kong with my Dad.
                          1.去掉
When I saw the plane, I thought it was very big. But when there was a lot of passengers seating
                                                                                                2. were                       3. seated
on the plane, it wasn’t very big any more. It could carry lots of people and baggages. That was 
                                                                                                                 4.baggage
so amazed! When the plane flew up into∧sky, my ears started to hurt. It hurt me very much
    5.amazing                                         6. the                                                       7. so
that I wanted to cry. I said to myself, “Don’t cry. I can’t cry.” But I couldn’t hold back from my 
                                                                                                                                          8.去掉

tears. “If you chewed a piece of gum, it will stop the harm,” dad said. When I heard that my dad
                      9. chew                                                                                             10. what
said, I chewed a piece of gum.

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短文改错，假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear friend,

　　I' m an Australian boy of 16 years old, live in Sydney．I like Chinese very much, but I want a pen pal in China．At school I like playing football and tennis．Our favorite subject is science because it' s very interesting．I won't like history, for I think it's rather boring．I play guitar well, so I join in the school rock band．In the afternoon we usually play football or tennis．We usually got home at about 5∶30 pm．For weekends I often go out for a swim, which is really relaxed．Do you like sports and games? Which do you like to play?

　　I' d like to get your early reply．

Yours truly,

Jack
短文改错。
     假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中
共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
     增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
     删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
     修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
     注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
                 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear editor,
     I am a high school student. A few days before, one of my very good friend told me that he was going
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I want to insist that I give it a try. The process is more important than the results. Now there are only 90
days leaving before the test. I am not sure that his decision is right or wrong. I needed your advice.
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短文改错。
     假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中
共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
     增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
     删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
     修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
     注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
                 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Abby,
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against my going there .They say it is too far that they will not see me for a whole year and they are afraid
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短文改错。
     假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。  文
中共有10处语言错误。每句最多两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
     增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
     删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
     修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改正后的词。
     注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
                   2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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短文改错。
     假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中
共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
     增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
     删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
     修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
     注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
                 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
     As is known to all that millions of graduates crowded into the job market each year. But because of
the financial crisis, the situation of the employment has become very serious. Consider this, some people
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I in favor of this idea. Firstly, compared with the big cities, the competition is not as fierce there, but
graduates can easy get a job. Secondly, the lower position may offer graduate more space. All in all,
going to the west  bring more benefits. Devote yourself to the west, for it is both good for our personal
development and for our country at present.
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