题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华。上周六你班在老人福利院开展了送温暖活动。请根据以下要点,写一篇短文给学校英文杂志投稿,介绍活动情况。
时间、地点;
活动内容;
你的感受。
注意:1、词数100左右;
2、可适当增加细节,使文章层次分明,行文连贯;
3、文中不得透露个人真实姓名及学校名称。
参考词汇:老人福利院 nursing home
A meaningful Social Activity
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【答案】A meaningful Social Activity
Last Saturday, our class held a meaningful activity showing our sincere concern for the elderly in the nursing home.
The moment we went there, all of us got started immediately. Some of us cleaned the rooms and windows carefully, some chatted with the elderly delightfully, and some even sang beautiful songs. This wonderful and happy moment lasted for more than four hours. At last, we left with full enjoyment and pride, promising more regular visits.
Caring for others is a traditional virtue of our nation. If everyone loves others unconditionally, we can surely make our country a better place to live. (101 words)
【解析】试题分析:本题考查提纲式作文。写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲,因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示,认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系,然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲,列出要点,并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来,本文要求写出活动的时间、地点、活动内容和你的感受。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用,主次分明,详略得当,语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展,按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写、错写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】
本文是一篇提纲式作文,介绍送温暖活动的情况。文章采用三段式,语言精练,结构布局合理,文中使用高级句子。Last Saturday, our class held a meaningful activity showing our sincere concern for the elderly in the nursing home.现在分词做后置定语;The moment we went there, all of us got started immediately. The moment在此处相当于as soon as引导时间状语从句,堪称经典;At last, we left with full enjoyment and pride, promising more regular visits.现在分词做伴随状态;Caring for others is a traditional virtue of our nation.动名词做主语;If everyone loves others unconditionally, we can surely make our country a better place to live.if引导的条件状语从句巧妙收尾。