Question

10．假定你是某中学的学生，请根据漫画内容和要求，以"Keep away from dangers"为题写一篇英语短文，向某中学生英语报投稿，讲述自己的所见所闻和认识．
注意：
1．文中不能出现个人的真实信息；
2．考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯；
3．词数：120左右；
4．标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数．
 
Keep away from dangers
I will never forget the unexpected incident that happened last Sunday．I will never forget the unexpected incident that happened last Sunday．The weather was very hot when I was walking by the lake，in which some children were swimming，ignoring the warming sign．（高分句型一） Suddenly，there came the screams"Help!Help…"．A boy was drowning with all the others at a loss．Luckily，a young man passing by jumped into the lake without any hesitation and managed to rescue the boy，who really experienced a narrow escape．（高分句型二）（事发过程）
As far as I'm concerned，we should increase the students'awareness of safety．Teachers and parents should warn children of the danger of swimming without adults'company．Especially as summer is approaching，chilren are supposed to be organized to participate in a variety of activities．What's more，all of us teenagers should always keep safety in mind wherever we are．（提出建议）．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
The weather was very hot when I was walking by the lake，in which some children were swimming，ignoring the warming sign
高分句型二：
Luckily，a young man passing by jumped into the lake without any hesitation and managed to rescue the boy，who really experienced a narrow escape．
句型一 in which some children were swimming，ignoring the warming sign．该句是一个非限制性定语从句，此处使用了介词+关系代词，which在句中替代前面的先行词lake，而此处介词的选择则依靠句子结构，孩子们是在湖里游泳，in （在．．里）
句型二 who really experienced a narrow escape．该句是一个由who作关系代词，在句中充当主语的非限制性定语从句
此外还有以下高级词汇和短语：
as far as sb be concerned 在某人看来  be supposed to do sth 应该做某事

解答 I will never forget the unexpected incident that happened last Sunday．The weather was very hot when I was walking by the lake，in which some children were swimming，ignoring the warming sign．（高分句型一） Suddenly，there came the screams"Help!Help…"．A boy was drowning with all the others at a loss．Luckily，a young man passing by jumped into the lake without any hesitation and managed to rescue the boy，who really experienced a narrow escape．（高分句型二）（事发过程）
   As far as I'm concerned，we should increase the students'awareness of safety．Teachers and parents should warn children of the danger of swimming without adults'company．Especially as summer is approaching，chilren are supposed to be organized to participate in a variety of activities．What's more，all of us teenagers should always keep safety in mind wherever we are．（提出建议）

点评 本文是图画类写作，考生在写作前应仔细观察所给图画，再运用准确的、合适的语言结合实际将图片内容描述清楚．写作过程中切忌偏离主题，尽量做到图文搭配．