Question

【题目】请阅读下面图画，按要求用英语写一篇词数为100左右的短文。

内容要求：1.描述画面（四个盲人摸象）

2.概述其意义并谈谈个人感想

注意：1．短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2．可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、行文连贯；

3．文中不能出现考生的具体信息。

In the picture,____________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】In the picture, we can see there are 4 blind men feeling different parts of an elephant’s body trying to figure out what it is like.

This is a well-known story from an ancient Chinese idiom. The man on its back insisted it was like a rough mat, while the man who happened to touch the teeth argued that it was actually like a carrot. Disagreeing with both of them the third man leaning against its body believed firmly that it was like a wall. Finally, the fourth man holding its tail believed in the shape of a grass rope.

Of courts, none of them is right, since they just take part of a thing as the whole. Judging things from as many sides as possible is a skill that needs improving all the way. We should draw lessons from this picture and don’t be short-sighted.

【解析】这是一篇图画类书面表达。要求描述画面，并阐述意义及个人观点。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。对画面的描写具体，并能表达出自己的看法。

【亮点说明】本篇范文结构合理，能够将画面内容完全表达出来，而且阐述了这幅画给我们的启示，完全符合作文的要求。作者在范文中使用了较多的复杂句式，例如The man on its back insisted it was like a rough mat, while the man who happened to touch the teeth argued that it was actually like a carrot.在这句话中作者使用了while表示前后的对比，而且还包含宾语从句，定语从句，是一个非常高级的句式。这也显示出了作者深厚的英语功底。