Question

【题目】面对繁重的学业负担，很多学生出现了不同程度的心理和身体方面的不适。假如你是校报编辑李华，代表校报向你的班主任Mr. Yan约稿，请他谈谈自己的看法。

稿件要求：1. 主题：How to relax ourselves；

2. 交稿截止时间为11月30日。

注意：1.词数100左右，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

2.文中不得出现真实姓名和班级等个人信息。

3.参考词汇：文章 essay 校报 the school newspaper

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr. Yan,

On behalf of the school newspaper, I am writing to invite you to share with our fellow students your perspective on how to relax ourselves when faced with such heavy academic burdens.

Many of us often feel tired both physically and psychologically, which will have a negative influence on our life and study. Each and every of us are wondering what to do to free us from the pressure. In view of this, your valuable suggestion as an experienced teacher should be of great help. Would you mind taking some precious time to write down a few specific coping approaches for the sake of your lovely students? We will be thrilled if your essay can be completed before November 30th.

We’d appreciate very much the chance to read your words of wisdom.

Respectfully,

Lihua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是应用文写作，考生需要发挥想象、展开思维，把文章内容写的具体、鲜活并且要有说服力。成文时要注意：写作时可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。词数100左右。

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