Question

【题目】某国际动物关爱协会面向全球中学生招募“动物代言人”，希望申请者选择一种自己喜欢的动物，为之代言（speak for）。假设你是南海育才中学的学生李华，有意参与该活动。下面是你的申请表：

Statement of Application
Name (姓名)	Li Hua	Sex (性别)	boy	Age (年龄)	18
申请陈述		有意参加		自己喜欢动物、关爱动物
		打算为熊猫代言		唤起动物保护意识
		熊猫可爱；国宝；珍稀动物；数量减少

现根据上面的申请表，写一封申请信。内容包括：

1. 你个人的基本情况；

2. 申请陈述内容。

写作要求：

1. 只能用5个句子表达全部内容；

2. 文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总句数。

评分标准：句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

Dear Sir or Madam,

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I hope I can do something for pandas. I'm looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Li Hua, an 18-year-old student at Nanhai Yucai High School. Knowing that you want some students to speak for the animals they like, I would like to participate in the activity and speak for pandas. I have been loving animals since I was a child and I care about animals very much. Not only are pandas lovely animals which are considered as the treasure of our country, but also they are rare animals in danger of dying out. I would like to speak for pandas so that I can raise people's awareness of animal protection.

I hope I can do something for pandas. I'm looking forward to your reply

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】本文是一篇书信类作文。1. 要求写申请信。考生在写申请类的文章时应注意：写作要点要齐全：(1)开头说明申请原因，信息来源。(2)介绍你个人的情况（教育情况、兴趣爱好、特长）。(3)希望得到机会，语气要自信坚定，同时期待收到对方答复。合理发挥想象力，使文章的表达自然，丰满。2. 文章的人称：以第一人称为主。时态：一般现在时。注意使用高级词汇和句型，以提高文章的档次；恰当使用一些连词使文章表达自然，流畅。

【范文亮点】

文章使用了一些高级词汇和短语，如：speak for，are considered as，in danger of，raise people's awareness

同时使用了高级句式，如：①I have been loving animals since...状语从句。②Not only are pandas lovely animals which are considered as the treasure of our country, but also they are rare animals in danger of dying out.倒装句和not only...but also...句型。③which are considered as the treasure of our country定语从句。