题目内容
【题目】Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学学生张华,你的朋友李明来信。在信中他提到他母亲不论在旅游时还是在生活中,总是未经许可就把他的照片发到微信朋友圈(WeChat Moments),这让他十分烦恼。请你写一封回信,给李明提一些具体的建议并说明理由。
【答案】Dear Li Ming,
Thank you for your email and I think you should not worry about this matter too much. You mentioned that your mother would post your photos on WeChat Moments without your permission. However, you did not tell me what exactly annoys you.
In my opinion, whatever the reason is, you should try to communicate with your mother. Tell her about your feelings and you should be able to work this out together. For example, if you feel insecure about having your pictures shared, you can kindly ask her to post those photos after speaking to you. As teenagers, it is normal to feel upset when your parents are doing something you do not like. The key to the issue is always communication.
That's all. Please let me know if you have further questions. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封回信,就李明的烦恼,给李明提一些具体的建议并说明理由。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1. 说明写信目的:提建议
2. 具体内容:
1)建议与妈妈交流
2)要求妈妈在征求你的意见后在传照片
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
worry about;without your permission;in my opinion;communicate with;be able to; for example;ask sb. to do
第三步:连词成句
1. Thank you for your email and I think you should not worry about this matter too much.
2. You mentioned that your mother would post your photos on WeChat Moments without your permission.
3. You did not tell me what exactly annoys you.
4. Whatever the reason is, you should try to communicate with your mother.
5. Tell her about your feelings and you should be able to work this out together.
6. If you feel insecure about having your pictures shared, you can kindly ask her to post those photos after speaking to you.
7. As teenagers, it is normal to feel upset when your parents are doing something you do not like.
8. The key to the issue is always communication.
9. Please let me know if you have further questions.
10. Looking forward to your reply.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改