Question

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：把缺词处叫个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　I hardly remember my grandmother．She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs．I was only four when she passes away．She is just a distant memory for me now．

　　I remember my grandfather very much．He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years．He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful．In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me．However, he was the gentlest man I have never known．

Answer 1

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解析：

1．[答案]holding－hold 　　[解析]此处used to意为：过去常常，to是不定式符号，故用动词原形。 　　2．[答案]passes－passed 　　[解析]根据前面was可知为一般过去时态。 　　3．[答案]much－well/clearly 　　[解析]根据句意可知，我很清楚记得我的爷爷。此处very much是多的意思，不合题意。 　　4．[答案]shoulder－shoulders 　　[解析]根据常理，人有两个肩膀，故用复数。 　　5．[答案]toward－to/into 　　[解析]根据句意，这里指：黑胡子变成白胡子。所以用短语turn to或turn into。 　　6．[答案]himself－him 　　[解析]句意：他的深沉的声音把他和别人区别开来。故用him。 　　7．[答案]he前加and 　　[解析]根据句中结构可知He had a deep voice…和he was strong and powerful是并列关系，故用and连接。 　　8．[答案]去掉fact前a 　　[解析]固定短语：in fact。 　　9．[答案]during－when 　　[解析]during为介词，后不能接句子；应用when这个连词引导时间状语从句。 　　10．[答案]never－ever 　　[解析]语义错误。根据句意：他是我认识的最温柔的人。可知将never改为ever。