题目内容
假定英语课上老师要求同学之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\),并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Jim,
Thank you for your last letter telling me your recently news. I'd like to tell you something about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct.20, which was a fine day. There were over 1,600 students and teachers attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meter race. He finishes the race in 11.2 seconds and broke down the school record. They were all very excited. The sports meeting was great success. That was why we were all making every effort to our class honor. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of what we had done.
Looking forward to receiving your letter.
Yours,
Li Ping
recently改recent
holding改held
attend改attending
finishes改finished
去掉down
They改We
great前加a
why改because
to改for
winner改 winners
【解析】
后面是名词news,说明这里应该用形容词的形式。
指运动会被举行,这里应该使用被动语态。
现在分词短语attending it修饰students and teachers.
文章讲述的是运动会上发生的事情,故使用过去时。
break the school record破了学校记录。Break down崩溃,机器坏了。身体垮了。
we指我们观看比赛的人。
本句的success是一个可数名词,指一件成功的事情,或一个成功的人。
That is because后面接的句子是表示原因的。
for为了…表示目的。我们是在为班级而努力的。
one of后面接复数名词,表示…之一。