题目内容
【题目】假设你是红星中学的高一(一)班李华。上周末你们班参加了高中第一次学校运动会。请根 据以下各图的先后顺序,用英语为校刊写一篇短文,报道你们班参与的过程。词数不少于80。文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:开幕式 opening parade; 看台 stand; 鼓掌 applaud; 宣布 announce
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Sports Meeting Held in Our School
Last weekend, we joined in our first sports meeting in high school.
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I believe this sports meeting will remain a precious memory for all of us.
【答案】Sports Meeting Held in Our School
Last weekend, we joined in our first sports meeting in high school. It started with the opening parade. Our parade took on the shape of the letter 'V', indicting victory. Everybody was in high spirits.
After the parade, the competition began, which was the most exciting part. My classmates took part in various events, the most exciting of which were high jump, long jump and the relay race. Their performances left us a deep impression. Meanwhile, on the stand my classmates and I applauded and cheered for the athletes. Some even raised their cameras to record the exciting moments.
Finally, the result was announced. To our delight, our class won the second place. Our efforts paid off! Cup in hand, we took a picture together, with a smile on everybody's face.
I believe this sports meeting will remain a precious memory for all of us.
【解析】
这是篇看图作文。本篇要求考生根据图画内容写一篇关于你班第一次参加学校运动会的情况。
体裁:记叙文
时态:根据提示,时态应以一般过去时为主
结构:总分总
要求:
1. 介绍入场
2. 本班运动员的情况
3. 本班其他同学的情况
4. 拍照留念
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
join in/ take on/ in high spirits/ take part in/ win the first prize/ have a deep impression on/ cheer for/ take photos/ pay off
第三步:连词成句
It began with the opening parade.
Our parade took on the shape of the letter 'V', which means victory.
All of us were in high spirits.
After that, the most exciting part-the competition began.
My classmates took part in various events, the most exciting of which were high jump, long jump and the relay race.
Every player tried their best, and their performances made a deep impression on us.
At the same time, the students on the stand all applauded and cheered for the athletes.
Some even raised their cameras to record the exciting moments.
To our surprise, our class won the first prize.
Our efforts paid off!
We took a picture together, with the cup in hands and a smile on everybody's face.
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)