Question

【题目】请阅读下面短文， 并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

You may not have noticed it , but every time you are very hungry, you tend to get angry much more easily and for no reason. You are getting “hungry”, which is “the phenomenon whereby some people get short-tempered when they’re longing for a feed”, CNN noted.

According to Health, the lower blood sugar stops the brain from working properly. As a result, we may feel ineffective and angry.

What we eat will provide the nutrients for our bloodstream. Then they are given to our organs and tissues and used for energy.

But if we are hungry, the nutrients will drop rapidly. And if they drop enough, our brain will think that it is in a life-threatening situation and cannot focus on its job. So you will find it’s hard to work or study efficiently and keep a peaceful mind.

Scientists advise to “carry healthy snacks with you---like fruit, and yogurt---so that when you are hungry, they will hold you over until the next meal.”

（写作内容）

1、用30个单词概括上述短文内容。

2、用120个左右单词来发表你的观点，内容包括：

谈谈你如何看待吃零食的现象，并用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的观点。

（写作要求）

1、写作过程中不可直接引用原文语句；

2、作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3、不必写标题。

（评分标准）

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

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Answer 1

【答案】People tend to get angry when hungry, which is due to lower blood sugar caused by lack of nutrients. A solution is put forward that healthy snacks should be carried.

From my point of view, eating snacks with nutritious choices that feed people’s bodies the nutrients is a must. On one hand, as we know, three meals a day is best. But after understanding the body better, we find a drop in blood sugar can be triggered by going for long stretches between meals. That drop not only causes overeating at meal time , but also transforms a person easily into a cranky monster. On the other hand, some snacks are high in fat or sugar. Obesity as well as various diseases can result from taking too much fat .Only by eating low-calorie snacks with rich nutrients can those who want to keep fit and take control of their weight benefit.

【解析】

本文属于读写任务。

要求我们就所给出的一段材料写一篇作文。仍然属于议论文，可以使用一般现在时和第三人称。在此文中应当使用第一人称来写。议论文是比较容易的文体，提出一个主题，对这个主题展开讨论。对于这类文体宜采用三段式文章，第一段首先确定主题，而在这篇文章中主题已经给出，只需要对题目中所给出的段落进行概括总结；第二段可以结合文章的提示与要求说出你自己的想法，并对其进行说明；第三段通过题目所给的要求举一个例子即可，中间需要运用上表起承转合的连词、定语从句、倒装等语法现象使文章富有深度、句式多变。

一、概括原文内容需要注意的是：

1. 要求：简洁明了、主题突出、控制字数。

2. 方法：

1) 确定主题句。2).寻找关键词。3).重构主题句。4). 重组支撑句（用自己单的语言解释比较复杂的语言文字，不能抄袭原文）。

二、写自己观点时的注意事项：

1. 观点明确、层次清晰、有理有据。

2. 方法：

1）紧扣文章主题。2）注意使用高级的词汇与高级的句型。3）总分结构。