Question

【题目】 成语（Chinese idioms）是中国文化的重要组成部分，它能用简单的词语表达出丰富并且深刻的意义。假定你是李华，你的外国笔友James对中国成语很感兴趣，向你咨询有关中国成语的信息，请你写一封回信，包括如下内容：

1.简单介绍成语;

2.学习成语的益处;

3.分享自己学习成语的感受和体会。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear James,

I am glad that you are interested in Chinese idioms.___________________________________

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I sincerely hope you can learn them well.

Yours

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear James，

I am glad that you are interested in Chinese idioms. Chinese idioms, mainly consisting of four or more Chinese characters, have been appealing to those absorbed in the Chinese language because they are an indispensable part of Chinese culture. The benefits of learning them can be listed as follows.

Firstly, with many of Chinese idioms widely used in our daily life, a good knowledge of them contributes to better understanding both spoken Chinese and written Chinese. Secondly, they usually possess vivid and profound meanings, making what you try to convey more convincing.

As far as I am concerned, I have a preference for the interesting stories behind some of the Chinese idioms. Not only are they interesting, but also they tend to teach some wisdom, which helps me a lot.

I sincerely hope you can learn them well.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：

本文是要求给对中国成语感兴趣的外国笔友James写封回信，像他介绍中国成语的信息。文章给出了提纲，成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全，三方面内容齐全：1.简单介绍成语;2.学习成语的益处;3.分享自己学习成语的感受和体会。(2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态：一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。

【亮点说明】

1.使用高级句型：with的独立结构with many of Chinese idioms widely used in our daily life,；使用了宾语从句…making what you try to convey more convincing.；Not only放句首的部分倒装以及非限制性定语从句Not only are they interesting, but also they tend to teach some wisdom, which helps me a lot.使用了过渡词语：Firstly，Secondly，As far as I am concerned等。3.使用了重要短语：consist of由…组成；appeal to吸引；contribute to有助于，促成，投稿。