题目内容
【题目】阅读下面材料,然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
James Bender, in his book How to Talk Well tells the story of a farmer who grew awardwinning corn.Each year he won a blue ribbon.One year a newspaper reporter interviewed him and learned something interesting about how he grew it.
The reporter discovered that the farmer shared his seed corn with his neighbors.“How can you afford to share your best seed corn with your neighbors when they are entering corn in competition with yours each year?” The reporter asked.“Why,” said the farmer, “didn't you know? The wind picks up pollen(花粉) from the ripening corn and carries it from field to field.If my neighbors grow bad corn, crosspollination(异花受粉) will slowly reduce the quality of my corn.If I am to grow good corn, I must help my neighbors grow good corn.”
He is very much aware of the connectedness of life.His corn cannot improve unless his neighbors' corn also improves.The lesson for each of us is this: If we are to grow good corn, we must help our neighbors grow good corn.
(写作内容)
1.突出:人与人之间本应和睦相处、互帮互助、共同进步;
2.以约30个词概括短文的要点;
3.以约120词发表你的看法,谈谈你的认识。
(写作要求)
1.作文中可以使用实例来支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容论述,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
(评分标准)
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。
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【答案】A farmer always won a blue ribbon in the state fair every year.His secret is that he helped his neighbor grow good corn to grow his own corn better.
So is our life.People in the world cannot live by his or her self, not depending on others.Those who choose to live well should also help the poor to live well, for the value of a life is not measured by the wealth one gains but by what the life brings to others.In fact, we're all members of a big family.As a Chinese saying goes, “One for all and all for one.” Donating blood to others benefits the donator.Picking up rubbish in your neighborhood creates a tidy environment for all the residents.
Therefore, we should help each other and get along with each other to improve our lives.Only in this way can we get our dreams of living a harmonious life realized.
【解析】
本文要求阅读材料,用约30个词概括短文的要点;然后再用约120词发表自己的看法,谈谈对此事的认识。写作时要求突出:人与人之间本应和睦相处、互帮互助、共同进步。
第一步:先通读材料,把握要点。材料讲述的是每年种玉米获奖的农民成功的秘诀就是懂得关联性,知道和邻居分享好玉米种子,共同提高,共同发展。然后由此发表自己的观点,人与人之间本应和睦相处、互帮互助、共同进步。
第二步:根据写作要求确定关键词(组),如:helped his neighbor grow good corn, So is our life, depending on others, bring to others, a big family, help each other, get along with each other, living a harmonious life.
第三步:根据提示和关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【题目】Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
你是李华, 日前报名参与社会团体 BenefiTEAM 组织的 7 月 3 日暑期一日实践活动, 收到了活动计划如下:
时间: 地点: 活动: | 9: 00--11: 30 上海火车站 为来沪旅客提供帮助信息 |
时间: 地点: 活动: | 13:00—16:00 华山医院 协助病人电子挂号( electronic registration) |
考虑自己的实际, 给该活动的组织者王老师写信, 如你觉得该活动计划有可修改之处, 提出你的修改意见并阐述理由; 如无, 提出你对有效实施该计划的建议并阐述理由。
(信中不得出现考生姓名,学校等真实信息)
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