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假定你是李华,刚刚以优异成绩从美国某大学毕业。你的美国朋友Tony邀请你去他 的公司工作.但是你想回国工作。请给Tony写一封邮件婉拒他的邀请。
内容要点包括:
1. 报效祖国;2.   照顾父母;3.   发展空间大。
注意:
1. 词数100左右   2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tony
Thanks for offering me a job in your company ,but I have decided to go back to work inChina .________________________________________________________________________
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Yours
Lihua


Dear Tony
Thanks for offering me a job in your company ,but I hav decided to go back to work in China. The reasons are as follows.
Firstly ,I’m a Chinese and I love my coutry . I feel it my duty to devote all I have learned in America to my motherland to make it stronger. Secondly my parents are aging, so , as their only sone. I need to be with them and take good care of them. Besides , China is developing very fast, which offers more opportunities for me to build my career. Lastly ,most of my friends and classmates work in China, that is , it is easier for me to live and work in a familiar environment.
I would appreciate it if you can understand my choice.  Wish you a splendid future.
Yours
Lihua

解析试题分析:考查提纲类作文写作,并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见短语:as follows如下;  feel it my duty to感觉做某事是我的责任; take good care of照顾; offer  me a job提供给某人某物。I feel it my duty to devote all I have learned in America to my motherland to make it stronger.这个句子中I have learned in America做的是all的定语从句,to make it stronger.做目的状语。Besides , China is developing very fast, which offers more opportunities for me to build my career.这个句子中which引导的是非限制性定语从句。I would appreciate it if you can understand my choice.这外句子中考查 I would appreciate it if …..如果你做某事我将不胜感激。
考点: 提纲类作文

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