Question

假如你们学校“英语爱好者俱乐部”将对“节约资源，爱我校园 Save Resources and Love Our School”这一话题进行讨论。请根据下列提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。内容要点应包括：
1. 描述校园里存在的浪费现象；
2. 谈谈这些浪费现象的不良影响；
3. 倡议节约资源，从我做起。（至少两点建议）
注意：1.发言稿必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；
2.词数：100左右.
Dear Friends,                                            _______________ __
___ __      _______________ __      _______________ __      _____________
__ __      _______________ __
That’s all. Thank you.

Answer 1

Very often we come across an empty classroom with lights still on. It’s not difficult to find evidence of wasting water. Additionally，some throw away the soft drink bottles, used exercise papers and books, which should be recycled. Worse still, others use non-environmental lunch boxes, causing “White Pollution”.
These phenomena show that many students lack the sense of environmental awareness, which is dangerous. If these continue, like the saying, “The last drops of water will be our tears!”
As for me, first I must help educate my schoolmates to be more environmentally friendly. Then we can start from doing some small things, such as collecting used items for recycling, turning off the lights, saving water. Always remember our responsibilities, and “Your contribution counts!”

解析试题分析：这是一篇发言稿，所以在语言的使用上要大众化，话题是关于“节约资源，爱我校园 Save Resources and Love Our School”，本作文中给出的要点比较简略,故需要充实文章内容，需要注意不要偏离文章中心。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式。范文中的These phenomena show that many students lack the sense of environmental awareness, which is dangerous.用的是宾语从句和定语从句。此外还要用适当的关联词把句子串联起来，使文章更加连贯，如Additionally，Worse still, first，then等。
考点：发言稿
点评：本文属于发言稿，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。并且注意字数限制