Question

【题目】假如你是新华中学的高三学生李华，你的美国朋友John最近在网上看到中国谚语“He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man”想了解相关信息，因此给你写了一封信。请你根据下面提示给他回信。

要点：1．谚语的含义；2．长城简介；3．邀请来中国亲自体验。

注意：词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）

参考词汇：the Spring and Autumn and Warring States the Ming Dynasty

Dear John,

I’m glad to learn that you are interested in Chinese proverbs. ___________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear John,

I’m glad to learn that you are interested in Chinese proverbs. The proverb “He who has never been to the Great wall is not a true man.” is about the Great wall.

The Great wall of China was built during the Spring and Autumn and Warring States periods and rebuilt in the Ming Dynasty to defend against enemies. Meanwhile, the Great Wall is one of the seven great wonders in the world, which is considered as a symbol of the Chinese people’s wisdom. Actually, climbing it needs courage, determination and other good qualities. Therefore, if you manage to climb it, it shows that you are equipped with those qualities as this proverb puts it.

I sincerely invite you to come to China to visit the Great wall.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类作文，要点已给出。根据要点文章可分三段来写：第一段讲谚语的含义；第二段讲长城，这就要求对长城有一定的了解；第三段讲邀请来中国亲自体验。写作时可充分展示自己的长城知识，同时注意字数控制在100左右。要用高级词汇和高级句子提升文章档次。

写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：文章还运用了宾语从句that you are interested in Chinese proverbs.和that you are equipped with those qualities as this proverb puts it. 定语从句who has never been to the Great wall和which is considered as a symbol of the Chinese people’s wisdom.不定式to defend against enemies. one of句型。defend against，manage to，equipped with，Looking forward to等词汇及Meanwhile, Actually, Therefore等连接词。